Prettiest Princess Tournament, Round 2 / Princess Amorphous B vs. Onion Princess

Prettiest Princess Tournament, Round 2 / Princess Amorphous B vs. Onion Princess

Prettiest Princess Tournament, Round 2 — Princess Amorphous B vs. Onion Princess

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Puzzlething
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# 15   Posted: Jun 27 2013, 12:41 PM
Roger           -

              So cute! I think you spent a little too much time on the introduction. If you knew you were only going to do 3 pages you need to just get on with it as quickly as possible, and give yourself as much time as possible to build up the story. Also, that 4th page could've felt like an actual funny addition to the story, not just an extra page, if you hadn't labeled it as such and just completed it.


Evi          -

        I love I went into PPT thinking Onion Princess is going to be a cute crybaby, and you end up writing her as such a seriously depressed and troubled person. It's such an awesome reversal of expectations. It's a testament to your writing ability and the character that even with such a surreal story, I'm super interested in what's going on, and trying to figure out the truth. It's almost like I get to feel like Onion Princess! I can't get a firm grasp on anything concrete, but I still keep looking for it.

          You don't really vary your line weight at all, and your stuff is already so charming I can't even imagine how great it would be with more expressive linework.

        I feel like I can't go a single fight without saying "Dang, these is pretty colours yo" but that's because everyone is just turning in the best stuff, you included. I love how the colour subtley shifts with the mood throughout. It gets more and more red and intense as Onion Princess more distraught, until everything breaks and we're suddenly let out into a more normal, calming, but still uneasy color scheme.

Fred v2.0.1
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# 14   Posted: Jun 25 2013, 03:14 PM
Roger, I did wish that you'd go for a bit more, because there's not much here that we didn't get in the previous round, but it was still a satisfyingly silly comic.

Evi, I like how red and surreal this is and I'm kind of glad that her allucinations are not limited to evil knights, now I'm really excited to see how she'll/you'll interpret meeting other princesses!

seevah
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# 13   Posted: Jun 25 2013, 03:05 PM
I keep reading this as a 2 part series where Roger's starts it and Evi's concludes it.

Roger: It was really nicely made and short.  But something seemed missing.

Evi: Such a twisted story from an adorable character and not in a bad way.

      Edited Jun 25 2013,  03:05 PM by seevah

Fed
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# 12   Posted: Jun 25 2013, 10:34 AM
Roger: Sweet. Short. Could've been longer :P

Evi: You continue the dark style and take us deeper into Onion Princess twisted mind.. I like the downward spiral and I'm a bit afraid where we'll end up.. but I'm looking forward to it!

      Edited Jun 25 2013,  10:45 AM by Fed

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# 11   Posted: Jun 25 2013, 09:30 AM
Roger: Fun, really short, not much else to say about it.

Evi: Yet again, your comic was unexpected and left me wondering so many things! I love the way you incorporated other princesses into the comic, although I wish Princess Amorphous B would have done a little more. I really enjoyed the coloring scheme and can't wait for more!

Evi
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# 10   Posted: Jun 25 2013, 09:05 AM
Oh my goodness Roger that was so adorable I love ittt

Evi
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# 9   Posted: Jun 22 2013, 11:22 PM
UPLOADED!
man I was so motivated to finish these pages, hopefully you guys will enjoy it as much as I do! and expect a lot of pink in this comic. now I must catch up on sleeeep
can't want to see your side, Roger :D

ColdShoulderAve
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# 8   Posted: Jun 18 2013, 05:53 AM
Yes. I am excite.

Roger_mild
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# 7   Posted: Jun 18 2013, 12:04 AM
I think its difficult to figure out a entertaining comic fight against and for an amorphous blob, anyway good luck to you too Evi.

Field Marshal Lionel Forsythe W. Underwood XIII, GBE
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# 6   Posted: Jun 17 2013, 09:01 PM
ooooohhhh another interesting match to watch.... GO GET EM YOU NOBLE WARRIORS!

Evi
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# 5   Posted: Jun 17 2013, 08:45 PM
AHH HOW DO I--
you know what, this will definitely be interesting. Good luck, Roger!

Puzzlething
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# 4   Posted: Jun 17 2013, 08:00 AM
This is terminal cuteness. Absolute cuteness. We have broken the cuteness barrier.

Red
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# 3   Posted: Jun 17 2013, 07:52 AM
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF THIS IS GOING TO BE SO ADORABLE.

Qyzex
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# 2   Posted: Jun 17 2013, 07:30 AM
awww yis, this will be cool

Adam@!
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# 1   Posted: Jun 17 2013, 07:28 AM
YES!!! I get to finally find out if amorphous blobs cry! I feel that is an age old question... my age starts at 3 years though. Can't wait to see it good luck to you both!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Jul 1st, 2013
Votes Cast: 43
Page Views: 1150
Winner: Evi
 

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