Prettiest Princess Tournament, Round 2 / Clown Princess vs. Lan Yun

Prettiest Princess Tournament, Round 2 — Clown Princess vs. Lan Yun

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Puzzlething
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457 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 27 2013, 05:22 PM
Atomic          -

             Clown Princess is so wonderful, and so is this comic. I can't tell you how much I love the color, and the character, and the humor and asohadowhdoawhdigwihfiwe so good. I don't even want to pick out on particular thing I loved, because I just enjoyed everything so much.  Amazing. AMAZING. Keep doing this!

     Also, I just noticed Blob Princess in the background ahahahahahaha.

Ninja                -

                  Jesus dude, I'm in awe of your art. It's so beautiful. I could seriously look at those shots of nature forever and ever. And you put such amazing life into your characters with only a few lines, placed and drawn in just the right way.So perfect. It takes my breathe away.

                 The only thing I didn't really like was the gun, if only because I was already scared of the head clown at that point. You had already perfectly illustrated the violence and power in him, that the gun felt out of place and unnecessary. You'd created an almost timeless feel to the comic, making the appearence of something so modern and clean kinda jarring. This is a really stupid thing for me to find fault with though, I'm just grasping at air haha.

Fred
Artist
550 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 25 2013, 02:37 PM
Cherry Pie, good freaking job yo. The colors are simple but great looking, your forms are getting more consistent with every comic and it's a joy to read as always. My only thing with it is when Lan does her trick, it could use to be more obvious what she's doing, to be more grandiose. As it is, I wasn't even sure what she was doing at first and it's just not circus worthy.

Really Brave, of course it's really good looking, and the story has potential, but I feel like some things could be better in terms of timing and emotion. For one, it does feel a bit forced, you're not supposed to stop and ask for a backstory when you're running away. If she'd gone with them and they were taking a break and she's telling her story, for example could have worked. On a similar note, I was pretty disapointed that she'd just let herself die. There such a thing as accepting death, but she was inviting it for tea and cookies. I also feel like the end would actually have been stronger without seeing her dead and bloody. Just imagine the page without that and see how empty and sad it becomes, instead of breaking the melancholy mood of the rest.

ninjacake
Artist
3 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 25 2013, 01:16 PM
Oh wow, that was so awesomely dark, Atomic!! Really great paneling and storytelling, as well. I found Clown Princess to be the cutest, funniest character from Round 1, so I was thrilled to be paired up with you. I also think it's hilarious that we somehow came up with the EXACT same sight-gag, of Clown Princess balancing on a ball and spinning plates on a sticks. :D

I had a pretty tough time deciding what to do for my comic; your character was so adorable that I didn't want to kill her outright. So I thought I'd turn her into a sort of tragic hero, who puts on a front of cheerfulness in a cruel world. I do find it interesting that both of our comics turned out so tragic.

Thanks again the AWESOME match, dude!

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 25 2013, 08:50 AM
Wow you guys, both of those were so sad!

Atomic: I like your color scheme, but it made it look like everything was covered in snow at first. I was also expecting another page for some reason, but it was still a good ending. Maybe I was just expecting a little bit more of a resolution or something? I dunno, I'm probably just crazy. I really love your storytelling always, and keep it up with your color experiments!

Ninja: I'm glad you were able to finish the entire comic this time. Your quality took a bit of a drop, especially in some of the poses (like the dog on page 2, which looks kind of weird compared to the perspective of the rest of the panel). I still just absolutely love your coloring and style! I can't wait to see more from you!

Fed
Artist
162 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 25 2013, 06:55 AM
God Atomic, that's twisted, sick and cruel... I love it! ^^

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 18 2013, 04:30 PM
I am rooting for Clown Princess so hard. Go girl, go!

Atomicfish
Artist
115 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 17 2013, 08:44 AM
Crap. I'm dead

Adam@!
Artist
84 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 17 2013, 07:26 AM
ooooh shiat this one will no doubt be a fun filled bag o' fun! Good luck you two!

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