Intro Story / Miyajima Minori

Intro Story — Miyajima Minori

by Jiisuri

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Crafty
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65 comments
# 6   Posted: Apr 27 2013, 08:19 AM
Solid work, and a totally unexpected ending XD I look forward to seeing more~

Puzzlething
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457 comments
# 5   Posted: Apr 26 2013, 08:34 AM
  Man you're just jumping right into this! At this rate you'll get the Creator achievement in record time! I'm gonna do a more indepth crit on your current fight when it drops, but I like the screentones! Watch stuff like the last panel though, the detective is suddenly taller than the door frame.

Mo Rice
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14 comments
# 4   Posted: Apr 25 2013, 01:41 PM
The turnout, hilarious.

Jiisuri
Artist
131 comments
# 3   Posted: Apr 22 2013, 07:35 PM
Yes, I missed out that one typo and only noticed now. |||orz

Iced Tea
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59 comments
# 2   Posted: Apr 22 2013, 01:46 PM
When I was seeing previews for these pages, I thought that man was having a breakdown because she gave him really bad news or something. So this final version was entirely unexpected.

Also you misspelled 'dumb'.

BUT HURRAY GRATS

Wubble
Artist
91 comments
# 1   Posted: Apr 22 2013, 11:00 AM
I'm so looking forward for more of her! This looks so great already :>

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