I really love your style! BenT pointed out a good thing to watch out for with line widths, but the thing I'd really like to point out is your writing. I'm assuming Spanish is your first language, or at least English is a second language for you. Try to get someone to look over your dialogue and writing to make sure it flows smoothly in English. If you do speak Spanish, I'd be more than happy to help since I know Spanish as a second language and even took a couple courses in translation. Anyways, I can't wait to see you battle!

PS--Feel free to skype me. My skype name is boboj0

Congrats on getting in and nice set up on your fighters motivation from your intro pages. Now let's see some battles!

such pretty art, and very cute characters! Cant wait to see more!

I can't wait to see you bring in those other characters from page 1. Looking good! My one problem with the art right now is that the line weights are too similar. You've got a lit of nice thick lines, now work on thinner lines for details and esspecially ij the backgrounds to make the characters and foreground details pop.