Aria Voidcraft vs. Oscar Fuentes

Aria Voidcraft vs. Oscar Fuentes

Aria Voidcraft vs. Oscar Fuentes

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neens
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# 14   Posted: Feb 18 2013, 11:51 AM
I'm also disappointed in the outcome of this. 4 weeks, AND you got to slip by the rules, and this is all that comes of it? a few hastily drawn pages and a no-show, tsk.

slade, right off the bat you got issues. first panel, that boy's head is WAY too big. and there's hardly anything in terms of backgrounds. last page you reuse the same panel three times.

Mister Kent
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# 13   Posted: Feb 13 2013, 02:00 PM
This was a short sweet story, Slade--though I do think it could have used a little more interaction between the two. Either another page of them talking or playing would have helped, I think. I do hope to see Aria in more beyond battles!

Bobo
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# 12   Posted: Feb 13 2013, 06:06 AM
I agree with Will. Slade, I enjoyed the little short story; the transition to the hospital got me a little confused; was the first part all in Oscar's head? Either way, you had 4 weeks to do this and it looks like a one weeker at best. I don't know what happened (for both of you), but I'm really disappointed. I hope you guys decide to stick around and do some more!

William_Duel
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# 11   Posted: Feb 12 2013, 08:01 AM
I have to admit I'm a little disappointed here.  For being an illegal battle and therefore special, it's almost not worth it.  I enjoyed your story slade.  No disrespect. I thought it was a fun little story with and I liked the style you used for both characters.  But it's very sparse, no shadows, no colors, not even blacks, it's very minimal for such a long deadline.  I'd like to see you come back with a greater effort slade because I know you are capable of more and you've done great entries in the past.

Robosockmonkey, I also think it'd be great if you could do more with this character.  I don't know your life story and how busy you are but it would be cool.

Pepper JAQ
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# 10   Posted: Feb 11 2013, 09:47 PM
ack... that third panel on the third page was supposed to have a fading effect on aria... oh well. *sigh*

Ten Dead Kings
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# 9   Posted: Feb 11 2013, 07:54 AM
Slade: It was a nice short story, straight to the point. Some of the panels in the flashback might look better with more detailed backgrounds, but then I think the way you compose the panels were alright. Also at least you're consistent with which direction where we can see the city in the background. Could use some more shadows/tones to make it prettier though.

The Bent One
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# 8   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 05:45 PM
You can still do as many Beyond Battles as you want, though.

Angie
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# 7   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 03:56 PM
I asked Toast about it about a week ago and never heard back. To be fair to Robosock I will allow the battle to be posted (unless Toast intervenes)

HOWEVER, if I catch anyone else taking advantage of this bug I will be canceling the battles without warning.

Robosockmonkey
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# 6   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 02:36 PM
I realized this a couple days ago, but figured it had been worked out... Is the battle still going to work out?

The Bent One
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564 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 12:57 PM
Yeah, I'm pretty sure you can't use dead characters to battle. Unless it's MONTH OF THE DEAD.

Evil_Encounter
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# 4   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 12:06 PM
angieness: Am I really the only one that has thought to bring this up? I'm confused about why Slade is using Aria when Aria died in the SDT against the Amazing Lobster Boy.
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No your'e not!

I'm quite new here but i don't think that this is possible

Angie
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1937 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 27 2013, 08:29 AM
Am I really the only one that has thought to bring this up? I'm confused about why Slade is using Aria when Aria died in the SDT against the Amazing Lobster Boy.

The Bent One
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# 2   Posted: Jan 14 2013, 04:53 AM
I'm getting weird flashbacks to the old VOID already. I can't wait to see what happens with this!

Majikura
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466 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 14 2013, 12:12 AM
finally. I was wondering when you'd come back.

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