Intro Story / Christopher Leandre

Intro Story / Christopher Leandre

Intro Story — Christopher Leandre

by Crafty


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Crafty
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65 comments
# 11   Posted: Jan 4 2013, 09:58 PM
Thanks for all the comments! I truly appreciate it!

I can't believe I forgot to resize the pages though. I got all swept up in the excitement of submitting, it totally slipped my mind! :V

Fed
Artist
162 comments
# 10   Posted: Jan 4 2013, 05:09 AM
I personally like your "scraggy" lines, it fits in good with the overall style of your comic - also your landscape scenes are beautiful and the story makes for some intriguing follow-up. But resize next time will ya? I hate scrolling :\

Evi
Artist
110 comments
# 9   Posted: Jan 2 2013, 03:33 AM
I really liked the setting for this introduction, it's so calm and pretty with them flowers and nature. I usually ain't a fan of messy lines, but I think you've made it work with the combination of your coloring! Looking forward to see what you do with this guy :)

Kozispoon
Approval Committee
1055 comments
# 8   Posted: Dec 31 2012, 04:59 PM
Nice introduction! Not often do you see the calm before the storm of fighter arriving to Void. I like the setting used here as a juxtaposition. From peaceful nature to a city of monsters. :)
I wasn't sure about the scratchy style used in these pages, but something tells me it'll grow on me the more I see it. Great work on those flowers as well. Shows you aren't all about drawing characters and know to show some love to your enviorments. Welcome aboard and looking forward to your first battle!  

Pennydox
Artist
235 comments
# 7   Posted: Dec 31 2012, 12:29 PM
by: might wanna zoom out a little to make the linework slightly cleaner. I also noticed that some panels or part of the panels are blurrier than others. In those cases, you may want to 'sharpen' those areas before you shrink it down (because when you shrink down an image it gets slightly blurrier). It's just to keep things consistent. You can also do the opposite, where you blur the lines/colors in areas where the main object is not focused on.

Zest
Artist
141 comments
# 6   Posted: Dec 31 2012, 11:17 AM
Cool character! Can't wait to see more from him.

Julz
Artist
371 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 30 2012, 08:21 PM
I am intrigued to see what happens in his quest for education! Eager to see what path he takes at Void and what he'll do to survive.

Kinu
Artist
150 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 30 2012, 03:41 PM
I really like this! Interested in the story you're gonna tell.

Tofubeast
Artist
254 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 30 2012, 03:38 PM
Cute comic! I love the detail you put into the backgrounds. Slight nitpicks: save your comics in a pixel size that's smaller so it's easier to read (and thus see your compositions better). I usually save my pages at 600 px size. Your expressions are great--a little fine tuning of your poses so that they don't look so stiff would help a lot, which is just a matter of finding the proper photoreferences or getting someone to pose for you.

Looking forward to seeing you do more comics!

Dechado
Artist
230 comments
# 2   Posted: Dec 30 2012, 03:24 PM
Congratulations on getting him in, Crystal.

I feel you've improved expressions since the last comic I saw from you. Keep it up, I really like your works. Looking forward for lots of stuff from Sharks. Good luck!

Atomicfish
Artist
116 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 30 2012, 03:19 PM
Oh man, Crafty. I'm glad you got Chris in. He's so cute and I want to see more of his story!

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