Intro Story / Johnny Sweet

Intro Story / Johnny Sweet

Intro Story — Johnny Sweet

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Mister Kent
# 3   Posted: Nov 18 2012, 03:14 PM
Johnny P vs. Johnny S would indeed be a sweet match-up!

I enjoy the unique concept--it will be interesting to see more of Johnny's dino-infused world. Welcome to Void!

Jetty Jay
# 2   Posted: Nov 14 2012, 07:02 PM
I have a Johnny Patch challenge in mind against you when I get a chance (and if you want to do it!).

Love the really solid character designs you've drafted up for this, and a really strong setting with minimal props and environment. I feel like the very last panel of the last page is a little sparse and could have used some more flats, but I can understand that it would be tricky to balance that and letting Johnny & her dinos stand out.

Well done, and welcome!

# 1   Posted: Nov 12 2012, 02:55 PM
Congrats on getting in! You've got a very solid first comic. Minor nitpicks: I think that the first panel of the second page where Johnny shoots the trinket out of the bandit's hand could have done with a sound effect to heighten the impact. Some other bits of action (Johnny's dino's tail smashing the other dino into the rock wall) could have been more emphasized or exaggerated a bit more to really pack that extra punch in.

Aside from that, welcome to void!

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Ended: Nov 19th, 2012
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