Intro: Cave / Lore Jooss

Intro: Cave / Lore Jooss

Intro: Cave — Lore Jooss


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Stekadarr
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9 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 6 2012, 09:38 PM
Thanks Mister Kent! c:

Mister Kent
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945 comments
# 7   Posted: Sep 29 2012, 05:46 PM
I really like your art style! With some more polishing, your lineart will be amazing (and its really good already.)  Looking forard to more from Lore Jooss and friends.

Stekadarr
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# 6   Posted: Sep 26 2012, 01:24 AM
Hey guys! Thanks for the comments so far!

@Skulls: Yeah, I kinda just wanted to get it over and done with; I meant to do this months and months ago! Next time I'll put more time into things :) Thanks

@Tofu: Ohai Tofu! Yeh, those cave floors were damn annoying XD Remind me to polish up on my polished ice/rock formations

@Kozi: I suppose my attempts at mystery and foreshadowing aren't that good, huh? XD I'll make sure to explain things more in my next battle thing

@Julienya: Awesome! Thank you~

Julz
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371 comments
# 5   Posted: Sep 24 2012, 09:27 PM
Intriguing! I love these characters and I look forward to more of this story!

Kozispoon
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1046 comments
# 4   Posted: Sep 23 2012, 01:31 PM
(accidental double post :P )

      Edited Sep 23 2012,  01:31 PM by Kozispoon

Kozispoon
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# 3   Posted: Sep 23 2012, 01:31 PM
I'm interested, I'm intrigued, but I have no idea what's going on XD As a newcomer coming into this comic who are these characters? What're they doing in that cave? Why does someone using a gondola matter?

I think what some fighters miss is that not everyone will be up to date on their characters backstories or previous adventures, so battles like these tend to fly over the heads of new readers.

Tofubeast
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# 2   Posted: Sep 23 2012, 11:39 AM
Hey Stekka, welcome back!

I'm going to second what Cracking said: I think at times the cave floors could have been defined a little bit more here, especially the floors the characters were crouching on.

Aside from that, good to see you doing voidstuff again!

Cracking Skulls
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# 1   Posted: Sep 22 2012, 11:42 PM
Sweet! Good to see a comic from you again!

The quality of the comic I would say could have been more polished. the sketchy line-art on the characters did make it feel like you may have been rushing at one point.

Other than that, welcome back! Can't wait to see you battling again.



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