Wow I am in both of your debt for the rad cameos and otherwise brilliant writing and continuity building you've accomplished here. So good to see SLAW traditions being upheld and Toro's legacy intact. You managed to elicit quite a few laughs per page Kura. Perfectly concise storytelling vignettes punchy as can be.  You two played off each other very well, keep it up.

jeez guys, both of these were amazing. I'm jealous.

OH MY GOSH Kura, your inside jokes killed me. Also, Q. XD I didn't even notice it until right before I went to the next page--I had to go back and do a double-take. Heh. It looks like maybe you rushed your comic a bit, but hey, it was plenty entertaining, and you had the whole Murphy's Law in there AND made fun of pretty much everyone. And I love that smiley face with a moustache in a trench coat and the self-referential stuff. AND WAIT--YOU HAD CARPOOL TOONLE? Points up for you, man; that's awesome! I think my favorite part was the Voidsbane, although the extra page was pretty awesome, too hahah.

Gregly: SQUEAK made me laugh out loud. So did Regi's "muscles." The story was very fun and lots of unexpected stuff happened. And I love your style a lot; especially how you can use such a simple style and still make each character look very unique. Your linework looks a little rough to me, like you didn't clean it up at all after scanning. I'm guessing you just didn't have a lot of time at the end, but maybe that's something to work on? I dunno, I just like your stuff.

You GUYS.

Both of you totally earned high points for entertainment. Kura your humor just make me laugh all the way to the end, and with carpal tunnel, you still managed to do 15 pages! Even if quality went a tiny bit down, You did good.

Gregly I died at how it went from cute to hilariously awkward, I have totally got to make that canon on my side somehow. Great job both of you!

Gonna start this off with, great jobs, both of you. I got a solid laugh from each of them, and you both turned out some good work.

Gregly: Well, what can I say? You really did good here. Your lines felt nice and clean, and I liked how you changed the color tone to suit the environment each part of the comic took place in. You've got great expressions going on. Why, Cue's face alone at the end got a laugh from me. One thing you might want to work on is adding in a few more backgrounds. I notice you go several pages at a time without really drawing any, and while the colors help to keep us reminded of where they are, nothing beats actually showing the place a couple extra times. Also, don't be afraid to play around with some different angles. While you did break it up every now and then, you tend to keep the panels focused mainly on their torsos and heads. Zoom out, tilt the camera a bit, even showing a nervous man shuffle his feet can create an interesting composition. In summary, don't be afraid to play with your angles a bit more, try adding in a few more backgrounds, and keep up the great work! I look forward to more.

Kura: Just what we can expect from a Cue battle, a great big bundle of ridiculous hilarity. You really know how to involve a whole gang without making it feel to cluttered, so aces man. Now, I'm not the most attentive reader, but I gotta say, every time I read this comic, I found something new that pulled a chuckle out of me. I'm not gonna go to hard on line quality, since I know you were having a rough time dealing with your hands, but the comic felt a bit empty at times. Be careful with those shots where you zoom out from the characters, cause when you leave the background blank, even with word bubbles, it can still leave a lot of white space. I would like to warn you about some overlapping lines you've got every now and then. Sometimes when you draw a character or lines in the background, you get a little stroke that crosses the line next to it. Watch out for these, because they can really break a sense of depth and make the work look a little rushed, when all it might have taken was a quick swipe with the erase tool. In summary, backgrounds, and line overlaps. They're some dangerous things to watch out for, but they really make a difference. As always, I'm looking forward to more, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next time!

Holy poo, you guys! These are both hilarious comics!

oh my god you two I was laughing SO. EFFING. HARD. This is pretty much the greatest battle I've ever read oh my gosh I am CRYING. I feel a little bad too lol these had so many in-jokes here I am busting a gut and I can't even begin to explain to my husband why its so funny! ^^;  Kura I loved the progression of cameos and how they were each thwarted (OMG thank you for the Lilyfeather cameo!), and gregly, Regi's awkward hilarious date, oh my god, a million points to everybody

LOVE. THIS.

Seriously, I couldn't get enough of this and read each twice. You two really brought it this time around! Even with color problems and carpal tunnel!

MAJIKURA- This was the comic of cameos, but it was handled so well that it didn't feel at all like it bogged down the story or detracted focus on the main characters we wanted to see battling it out. I love that this way the world of VOID via your comic feels lived in, populated by more than you and your opponent and that there were elements to interact with. I especially dug the humor. You had me laughing at multiple points such as Vivian's hate for Le Freak or go Tsumi laying the smack down.

I think the best part had to be Cue being the only winner against Gwen and Regi, but she couldn't lift the gold bar. That panel with her saying "FUCK" killed me. XD So many pages and such a wonderful ride. Great job!

GREGLY- I dug that you took a more centralized and focused take on the battle at hand and made it all about who v.s. who. I love that Regi and Xia started as part of an art jam and are now becoming hilarious canon via your comic. Cue's attempts to throw wrenches in the situation, to me seemed halfhearted at best, but regardless, I dug where the story was going. I definitely got a laugh over Regi yeling 'ABORT! ABOT!' once Xia got too amorous- haha, poor robo.

All in all, wonderful work from the both of you, but I'll have to lean my votes more towards Majikura solely due to the lulz factor.

Uploaded mine!
I was hoping to color this a little more but I didn't have time, which is surprising given how much time I had to do it!
Can't wait to see yours Kura!

uploaded. sorry for the random quality. Carpal Tunnel Syndrome is a bitch.

One day left! FFFFFFFFFF-

aw, is this happening? cuuuuute!

yyyeeeeeeessss

Yikes!