Con: Haha yeah definite stalker vibe as Atomic mentioned. Had a minor head-splosion from the cuteness, particularly the last few pages. The way you drew Max did seem a little jarring in contrast with the uber-cute, but I suppose he was the only adult here
Axe: This was a compelling story, pity the deadline was a killer as I'm really interested to know how this would've ended. Great job with characterising both Morrow & Bhindi, and while I've had trouble following your previous stories I'm starting to get a better idea of your character now
Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 3 / Morrow Stone vs. Max, Maximus
Critiques & Comments
# 15
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May 8 2012, 02:24 AM
# 14
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May 7 2012, 09:55 PM
Huh, so Max is a stalker?
No honestly, nice pages you guys. I like that little Bhindi finally found her friend, so cute!
No honestly, nice pages you guys. I like that little Bhindi finally found her friend, so cute!
# 13
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May 7 2012, 08:20 PM
Con: Cute, as always. I love Bhindi punching Morrow in the face. That's priceless. It looks like you were struggling a bit with drawing Max's face... it's just not nearly as strong as your cute or cartoony characters. I know it's something you can handle, though... just keep at it until you find something that really works for you!
AxeLord: The blue tint here is really throwing me off, for some reason? I would much rather be seeing your lines on a white background. Sorry to see this unfinished, I know the week-long deadlines are tough. It was pretty interesting to see those couple of coloured panels, but honestly, I think I like your work far better in black & white.
AxeLord: The blue tint here is really throwing me off, for some reason? I would much rather be seeing your lines on a white background. Sorry to see this unfinished, I know the week-long deadlines are tough. It was pretty interesting to see those couple of coloured panels, but honestly, I think I like your work far better in black & white.
# 12
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May 7 2012, 12:05 PM
AxeLord: I can't get over that Max is only a foot taller that Morrow, lol. I gotta say Con I loved Max in your comic, spot on. He's been a character of mine for some time, and soon I think I'll explain why he is the way he is. Morrow is just adorable, I can't wait to see him cut loose lol.
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I actually really like your rendition quite a bit better! I was worried I'd gotten Max absolutely backwards. I tried to base him off his previous rounds and his profile where he generally stayed aloof to his competitors or used his powers to make something happen rather than direct interaction. I can't wait to see your comic that expands on him a bit because he is a very interesting guy.
Your work with Morrow is right on the money too. I love how you draw him, it's too much adorable to handle. And good tie in with the last comic, nicely done all around bro.
# 11
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May 7 2012, 11:49 AM
I can't get over that Max is only a foot taller that Morrow, lol. I gotta say Con I loved Max in your comic, spot on. He's been a character of mine for some time, and soon I think I'll explain why he is the way he is. Morrow is just adorable, I can't wait to see him cut loose lol.
# 10
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May 6 2012, 08:01 PM
I also just uploaded. Keeping in line with my "trying something new each round" thing, I tried for a new program, Sai. So it's digital. But in going digital, I lost a couple pages in an accidental system restore. So it's a bit rushed. I couldn't even keep my promise to do some greys! Sorry guys. xD
Axe, I can't wait to see your rendition of Morrow i'm srs. Come on deadline, sock it to us! Good luck to us both yer?
Axe, I can't wait to see your rendition of Morrow i'm srs. Come on deadline, sock it to us! Good luck to us both yer?
# 9
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May 6 2012, 06:24 PM
Pages submitted, this week deadline is kicking me in the pants. It's a wonderful learning experience, frustrating though it may be. Practice practice practice.
# 8
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Apr 30 2012, 09:18 PM
AxeLord: Yes'm I do have a DA http://exemplarx3.deviantart.com/
I've seen you around, even follow you.
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OIC, I just wanted to link you in my journal. Can't waittttt.
# 7
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Apr 30 2012, 07:18 PM
Good luck to the both of you guys, man. Can't wait to see where you take this story haha!
# 6
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Apr 30 2012, 12:36 PM
# 5
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Apr 30 2012, 12:03 PM
Let's see it! Woo!
# 4
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Apr 30 2012, 11:17 AM
AxeLord: Up against Con eh? This should be most interesting. Gonna try something different this time around, and see what comes of it.
Good luck, have fun :3
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You got a DA son?
# 3
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Apr 30 2012, 11:07 AM
Up against Con eh? This should be most interesting. Gonna try something different this time around, and see what comes of it.
Good luck, have fun :3
Good luck, have fun :3
# 2
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Apr 30 2012, 09:44 AM
Good luck to us both, Axe! Can't wait to see what you come up with.
# 1
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Apr 30 2012, 07:11 AM
Good luck both of yah!
Tournament Match
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