A friend of mine is an artsy writer guy. He's very good at it. He's also the laziest person I have ever known, in my entire life.
Under, I think you may be his omega. While he is the universal center of Laze, you are the Anti-Laze. May the gods grant that you never meet.
(also I really liked this comic, and I'm glad you're using the same continuity as your tourney, it makes Angus even more fun to follow)
Dial M for Mr. Murder Prelude / Angus Blackader
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
Apr 26 2012, 12:16 AM
# 7
Posted:
Apr 25 2012, 07:22 PM
Oh wow! I really like this style for Blackader. It has a nice old-fashion/vintage feel to it. I don't think there's too much black, but perhaps it might be nice to see more expressions. However I realize this is a very realistic style and there's only so much that can or should be done. Either way it still reads awfully well!
4 hours! sweet bejeezus.
4 hours! sweet bejeezus.
# 6
Posted:
Apr 25 2012, 06:54 PM
4 hours?! My stars. I wish I could eat your brains to gain your power.
# 5
Posted:
Apr 25 2012, 06:16 PM
You sure didn't waste any time, good sir. Yes, this is shaping up to be quite nice. Looking forward to what you and (was it Rofl?) have in store.
# 4
Posted:
Apr 25 2012, 05:11 PM
Fed: I like the first page. It made me think of treasure island
I think the inking could use a little less black in the backgrounds and stuff, but that's just me.
And really, half a day?? That's impressive anyway you look at it
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i'm still getting the hang of this style... i am a little bit rusty but i hope to bring it up a notch... i appreciate suggestions and critiques so thanks mate.
# 3
Posted:
Apr 25 2012, 05:05 PM
Qyzex: you are a comic beast. You did this in what... half a day? If even that?
It looks good. It looks damn good.
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4 hours... just testing the waters...
# 2
Posted:
Apr 25 2012, 05:01 PM
I like the first page. It made me think of treasure island
I think the inking could use a little less black in the backgrounds and stuff, but that's just me.
And really, half a day?? That's impressive anyway you look at it
I think the inking could use a little less black in the backgrounds and stuff, but that's just me.
And really, half a day?? That's impressive anyway you look at it
# 1
Posted:
Apr 25 2012, 04:58 PM
you are a comic beast. You did this in what... half a day? If even that?
It looks good. It looks damn good.
It looks good. It looks damn good.
Beyond Battle
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1 week
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May 2nd, 2012
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