Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 2 / Cat Suit vs. Ted Bushberry

Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 2 / Cat Suit vs. Ted Bushberry

Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 2 — Cat Suit vs. Ted Bushberry

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Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 24   Posted: Apr 29 2012, 08:28 PM
Fed, your style's much more strip oriented & felt much more like a decompressed version of one. It worked well here, especially given the deadlines, but I could've done with more story happening. The end came more like a punchline than a resolution. And maybe slow down on your shading hatches, keeping them in one direction. In the fourth thumbnail, you can even see the pen bouncing back, making the lines more of a checkmark rather than a line. Lines are cleaner.

TINMAN
Artist
140 comments
# 23   Posted: Apr 28 2012, 11:18 AM
Cola: NOOOOO! Don't let this be the last we've seen of Catsuit. That would be a crime.

Fed: Damn this is such tightly wound and well orchestrated comic. You pack a lot into so few pages and all your jokes land with a punch. I love your premise and the narrative, clearly intelligent writing I just wish your presentation was clean and clear to match it- your cartoony style is great but those half assed borders and misaligned layouts hurt the vibe some. You could up your game by striving for refinement and maybe using less hatching and going tonal. Still solid comic all around.

Fed
Artist
162 comments
# 22   Posted: Apr 26 2012, 04:54 PM
Evil Eye:  Had a particularly strained laugh at the ending there.
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Told you the jokes were cheap

Anyways, thanks for all the nice feedback guys. Glad you liked it :) I'm not sure what I should improve on from here - any tips?

ShouldaCouldaCola: Shame you didn't find the time to get it done :\  These 1 week deadlines can really be killer when real life interferes. I have to say Cat Suit was really a challenging character to wrap my head around, least of all draw with him standing on his hands all the time and communicating via his butt. Hope to see more from him (and you) in the future :)

ShouldaCouldaCola
Artist
48 comments
# 21   Posted: Apr 26 2012, 10:57 AM
Fed! That was super funny, the "this is not the hero void needs" line was awesome.

ShouldaCouldaCola
Artist
48 comments
# 20   Posted: Apr 26 2012, 10:57 AM
I'm so sorry everyone. This past week has been crazy busy at work.

I'm super sorry Fed :(

Gibbo
Artist
82 comments
# 19   Posted: Apr 26 2012, 06:54 AM
Oh hey, like the Nova cameo at the end there Fed... and was NOT expecting that last frame!  XD

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 18   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 09:48 PM
Fed-really fun comic start to finish, the ending was very memorable. In some scenes the lines felt like they got a little thin and harder to read, perhaps it's just because I'm on a larger monitor but on page 2 a few things were getting lost. A quick fix would be to duplicate the layer in Photoshop and set it to multiply to make your lines just slightly darker.

The Sketch Fighter
Artist
18 comments
# 17   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 08:38 PM
I honestly did not see that coming. And some of it I wish I didn't see, haha! Pretty funny all around, man.

Shen
Global Moderator
1301 comments
# 16   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 07:58 PM
aw, Catsuit, wryyyy? This battle was going to be so epic! Well at least we have Ted's amazing entry, and I laughed out loud at the end! Nice job Fed!

space-aged
Artist
26 comments
# 15   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 04:04 PM
Haha, excellent Fed! I loved that ending.

slothvert
Artist
71 comments
# 14   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 02:19 PM
Ffffff.. Fed! This was awesome. Some of your catsuit drawings are just outta-this-world hilarious. I think the line quality is much tighter than your last battle, too, but whether that's an actual drawing-improvement or just better digital compression, I can't say. Either way, I loved this comic, and I'll be glad to be seeing more from you!

shouldacouldacola... I'm not gonna lie, I am really intimidated by catsuit. This default comes as something of a relief, to myself and other competitors, I'm sure. I hope you'll stick around for more non-tourney battles, though! Butt jokes. They work.

Con
Artist
92 comments
# 13   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 01:14 PM
Hah hah hah, nice work Fed! I really enjoyed the reveal. xD

Tofubeast
Artist
254 comments
# 12   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 12:39 PM
Bummer, catsuit's a no-show. Still, Fed, you got one hell of an amusing comic, and I like the linework to boot!

Evil Eye
Artist
85 comments
# 11   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 12:22 PM
Haha, alright, that was pretty funny.  For something you apparently slapped together in a jam, it gets the job done plenty.  Had a particularly strained laugh at the ending there.  Good stuff.

purplemuffin
21 comments
# 10   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 12:12 PM
Awww such a shame, catsuit!


But Fed, wow, what a funny comic! It really made me giggle. Great work! Good luck in the next round!

Evil Eye
Artist
85 comments
# 9   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 12:09 PM
nooooooooooooooo catsuit :(

Not that Fed and Ted and chopped liver or nothin', I just haven't read yet.  And I really, really, really wanted to see two renditions of this great matchup.  Le sigh.

Video320
Artist
116 comments
# 8   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 10:32 AM
Catsuit?!?!

Thats was pretty funny, a nice end to catsuits role in this tourney.

Hiemie
Artist
511 comments
# 7   Posted: Apr 25 2012, 10:08 AM
Oh noooooooooo

Dibs on catsuit.

Fed
Artist
162 comments
# 6   Posted: Apr 24 2012, 07:14 PM
The story is weak, the jokes are cheap and because I spent 3 days on holiday the art is lacking..

BUT IT IS FINISHED AND UPLOADED!!!

Evil Eye
Artist
85 comments
# 5   Posted: Apr 23 2012, 02:28 PM
This matchup is probably one of the funnier things I can imagine coming from this tournament.

J.Vandermeer
Artist
61 comments
# 4   Posted: Apr 23 2012, 09:16 AM
Do you know how excited I am for this match?
So excited.

Hiemie
Artist
511 comments
# 3   Posted: Apr 17 2012, 10:39 AM
Yes.

Albino Turtle
Artist
21 comments
# 2   Posted: Apr 17 2012, 10:37 AM
This will be really entertaining!
GOOD LUCK TO THE BOTH OF YOU!

Fed
Artist
162 comments
# 1   Posted: Apr 17 2012, 06:35 AM
Auch, just the one opponent I was hoping to avoid.. I can see my ass getting kicked in this one. Still, can't wait to see your take on Ted!

Best of luck (not that I think you need any ;)!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Apr 29th, 2012
Votes Cast: 38
Page Views: 1098
Winner: Fed
 

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