I think you really nailed the pacing, I love the little squid flipping scene on the first page Can't wait to see the end!

The story is enjoyable so far, I'll be looking forward to see where this goes next.

Enjoying it so far!

Looking great man. Also, did I just get a shoutout or is the name just a coincidence? Haha

this is so precious ;A;

It's hard to tell with the preview but as far as I can tell the pacing seems great and I love the character designs - especially the home city, it looks so different from Void city, it's fantastic. You know I love Leland very much. Also

THAT NOSE.

Very cute. I love young Leland's big arse nose, which made him instantly recognizable. The cement  pipes and the whole setup the kids were playing on was very well realized. As a preview, I'd say this was really successful, because I WANT MORE.
Nice work!

I really dig the style for this. Nice work! I look forward to the rest.

I love the contrast between LeLand and young LeLand.

Hey, this is looking awesome! I can't wait to read the whole comic. The anthology is gonna rock.

I loved the backgrounds in this, and the setup is nice and intriguing. I can't think of anything else to say, so I'll just say, good job!