Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 1 / Beo vs. Samantha Barcillina

Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 1 / Beo vs. Samantha Barcillina

Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 1 — Beo vs. Samantha Barcillina

by Nothin

58%
751 points
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by Jinbee

42%
543 points
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Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 15   Posted: Apr 15 2012, 07:06 PM
Nothinggoingon-the style you chose for the characters is very nice! The backgrounds however felt like an afterthought. Try to make them feel as lively as your characters and you should go far. Another suggestion is to go to http://blambot.com and get some proper comic fonts, because your current font choice isn't the greatest.

Jinbee-not much to say here, would like to see you do a comic in the future!

DragonHeart
Artist
97 comments
# 14   Posted: Apr 15 2012, 03:07 PM
NothinGoinOn:
I think considering the lack of detail on your pages you should probably scale them down a bit size wise. Theres no need for them to be so large on the screen.
Rub out pencil lines better and also the handwritten type doesn't really work. I think it could though. I get that your trying to make it quite explosive and crazy but I still think a bit of structure to it might help. Draw some lines in pencil (straight ones) and just make it a bit neater but still keep that expressiveness.


Jinbee:
The dialogue is nice and I like the character. Just do a full comic. :)

TINMAN
Artist
140 comments
# 13   Posted: Apr 13 2012, 08:33 AM
NGO: Its sort of funny but you take longer than you needed to getting to the point. Your quality also drops off substantially beyond the first few pages so strive for consistency as you've got some nice design elements and lines that just need cultivation. Beo is a likable character that I think you intend to develop in time so keep at it.

Jinbee: You have the makings of something stylish here but clearly didn't get very far on it. I like what I see though, You have some nice setup, just need more follow through.

Hiemie
Artist
511 comments
# 12   Posted: Apr 11 2012, 08:35 PM
NGO: Did you draw your phone? You did, didn't you. As I've said to a lot of people, you got ambitious, and likely misinterpreted your time. I liked the plot, but things just looked incomplete. You could have at least doctored up your linework. No matter, it's a nice first comic and I hope to see more.

Jin: Ditto for you. Try another battle, and work with a longer deadline. I know you got it in you. Your design sheet had such polish. Please don't get discouraged.

Jinbee
Artist
7 comments
# 11   Posted: Apr 10 2012, 02:52 PM
Lol, I'll try not to let this deter me from future battles.XD

Kinu
Artist
150 comments
# 10   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 08:50 PM
I'm sad that you didn't get to finish. If you get the chance to submit a finished version for a beyond battle someday, that could be cool. Regardless, looking forward to seeing more from you.

Nothin, yours made me laugh. I won't bother repeating what everyone else said. Can't wait to see what you can do in future rounds!

slothvert
Artist
71 comments
# 9   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 03:52 PM
Nothingoingon, I agree with past comments. Consistency in style would have made a big difference in the overall presentation of the comic.

Jinbee, sorry to see you didn't finish. What you had seemed plenty entertaining, although your downfall may have been planning too many pages for a one-week tourney. Better luck next time!

Con
Artist
92 comments
# 8   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 11:16 AM
Nothing, Good work. Wish I could see some more consistent work from you. But definitely creative win here.

Jinbee, Good style but no finish. Hoping for something more in the future.

Fed
Artist
162 comments
# 7   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 10:27 AM
NothingGoingOn: Yes, that's the way to win a fight, throw your dirty underwear! Your story made me laugh, but consistant artwork all through would have given you better marks!

Jinbee: Shame, your character promised so much..

Jinbee
Artist
7 comments
# 6   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 09:28 AM
lol, at least it's not as bad as mine.:'D

Nothin
Artist
39 comments
# 5   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 12:01 AM
Ugh, I feel so bad... My stuff is so unfinished it's painful. Easter got in the way too much @A@

*edit* I love how both our ideas turned out clothes oriented though

Jinbee
Artist
7 comments
# 4   Posted: Apr 4 2012, 10:51 AM
[edit] didn't get things done as I hoped, I'm sorry guys.;A;

Finally sketching out pages, lots of work to do for the weekend!:'D

Charlie
Artist
730 comments
# 3   Posted: Apr 1 2012, 06:17 PM
Welcome back Jinbee!!

ALSO GOOD LUCK GUYS.

DelBarrio
Artist
426 comments
# 2   Posted: Apr 1 2012, 05:26 PM
This seems promising. <3 Good luck both of ya!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 1   Posted: Apr 1 2012, 11:39 AM
Jinbee, welcome back! So glad you could join us back on the battlefield!

NothinGoingOn, work hard and make some rocking comics!

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Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Apr 16th, 2012
Votes Cast: 44
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Winner: Nothin
 

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