bl00chilkin:
This really worked. Seemed really flawless.
You are very skilled at human (and roach) interaction. I really feel like I got into their minds. ANd you did it all while keeping it so simple, just a series of facial expressions. A real strength. I'm intrigued as to what you can do with action or with a very strange or absurd setting. I think you have the possibilities to take the character i=on many fun journeys with his ability to be so small. Can put a totally different spin on stuff.
Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 1 / Lore Jooss vs. Roy
Critiques & Comments
# 20
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Apr 15 2012, 03:21 PM
# 19
Posted:
Apr 11 2012, 08:08 PM
Stekadarr-sucks you couldn't do much! That one page looked cool.
bl00chikin-I think this was actually my favorite comic this round. You did a very nice job on the coloring and the expressions. While things were occasionally a little rough around the edges, it was a very easy to understand comic and was very entertaining.
bl00chikin-I think this was actually my favorite comic this round. You did a very nice job on the coloring and the expressions. While things were occasionally a little rough around the edges, it was a very easy to understand comic and was very entertaining.
# 18
Posted:
Apr 11 2012, 12:00 PM
Skedar: Funny little page. Shame you couldn't finish. I know things come up. Try another comic with a longer deadline.
Bloo: Now this was a classy little comic. I enjoy how you didn't try to put your character in a dominant position. It adds some conflict and interest to the story. The art is nice if a bit sloppy at points, but tightening up is a result of having more time to work on it and drawing more. I know you had a lot to put in your comic in a small amount of time. Looking forward to your next round.
Bloo: Now this was a classy little comic. I enjoy how you didn't try to put your character in a dominant position. It adds some conflict and interest to the story. The art is nice if a bit sloppy at points, but tightening up is a result of having more time to work on it and drawing more. I know you had a lot to put in your comic in a small amount of time. Looking forward to your next round.
# 17
Posted:
Apr 10 2012, 12:31 PM
Stekadarr: My god.
Bl00chikin... I think I love you.
Your colours and your gestures and your amazingness are just asdfghasdasasdg amazingggg
You deserved more of a match. I owe you some serious fanarts.
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No probs man, i understand. I was so close to dropping out because of school work. You're more that welcome to a rematch after this tournament when you have more time, if you want. I'm sure Roy would love to see Lore again (Ps.--I was tickled when I saw your character because she looks pretty damn close to the girl that I had in line for him in his actual story, her name also starts with an L)
# 16
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Apr 10 2012, 12:25 PM
Delya: Stekadarr: Shame you couldn't finish! Nice little blurb, though.
Bl00: Roy is pretty much my kinda guy. :'D Love the expressiveness of your characters. If you had a longer deadline I bet you could clean up the lines and colors, add some more backgrounds in there, and we'd have a real ace comic on our hands. Looking forward to seeing more from you fo'sho'. :]
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Thanks! ha yeah I wish i could have had more time to make it look pretty.
# 15
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Apr 9 2012, 10:05 PM
Bl00chikin, dude. Your comic is sooo much fun, I'm loving Roy!
# 14
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 09:08 PM
Excellent work, Bloochikin! Dug every second of that!
Steka, don't make this be your only fight. I wanna see more from ya! Regardless of it not being what you wanted to submit, I still found yours funny xD
Steka, don't make this be your only fight. I wanna see more from ya! Regardless of it not being what you wanted to submit, I still found yours funny xD
# 13
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 05:08 PM
My god.
Bl00chikin... I think I love you.
Your colours and your gestures and your amazingness are just asdfghasdasasdg amazingggg
You deserved more of a match. I owe you some serious fanarts.
Bl00chikin... I think I love you.
Your colours and your gestures and your amazingness are just asdfghasdasasdg amazingggg
You deserved more of a match. I owe you some serious fanarts.
# 12
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 03:29 PM
Stekadarr, I know how you feel! It's been one hell of a busy week for me as well.
Bl00chikin, I think I've fallen in love with your comic.
Bl00chikin, I think I've fallen in love with your comic.
# 11
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 12:02 PM
Stekadarr: Shame you couldn't finish! Nice little blurb, though.
Bl00: Roy is pretty much my kinda guy. :'D Love the expressiveness of your characters. If you had a longer deadline I bet you could clean up the lines and colors, add some more backgrounds in there, and we'd have a real ace comic on our hands. Looking forward to seeing more from you fo'sho'. :]
Bl00: Roy is pretty much my kinda guy. :'D Love the expressiveness of your characters. If you had a longer deadline I bet you could clean up the lines and colors, add some more backgrounds in there, and we'd have a real ace comic on our hands. Looking forward to seeing more from you fo'sho'. :]
# 10
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 11:52 AM
Ohh man I love Roy so much.
# 9
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 11:31 AM
Absolutely fantastic entry, bl00chikin! Roy's personality and dialogue are exceptional, and the expressions throughout are awesome.
Sorry to see Stekadarr stepping out of the ring. The single page that's there made me chuckle, at least.
Sorry to see Stekadarr stepping out of the ring. The single page that's there made me chuckle, at least.
# 8
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 10:23 AM
bl00chikin: Yeaaah, the roof is on fire! Great stuff, just love that style and you've really given Roy a personality to be proud of.. Can't wait to see more of this guy
# 7
Posted:
Apr 9 2012, 10:10 AM
Stekadarr: I'm really sorry guys, but I think I'm gonna hafta drop out.
I've got too much crap going on and the deadlines are just too close to keep up with this tourney and I don't think it'd be fair for any future opponents (in the unlikely event I even got past this round, bloochikin is just too awesome for that) if I kept going. Today I just can't seem to draw anything right and I realised this situation will probably repeat itself for me. I'm too much of a procrastinator.
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# 6
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Apr 8 2012, 09:59 PM
I'm really sorry guys, but I think I'm gonna hafta drop out.
I've got too much crap going on and the deadlines are just too close to keep up with this tourney and I don't think it'd be fair for any future opponents (in the unlikely event I even got past this round, bloochikin is just too awesome for that) if I kept going. Today I just can't seem to draw anything right and I realised this situation will probably repeat itself for me. I'm too much of a procrastinator.
I'm submitting a page of Roy harrassing some pigeons. Paltry compensation compared with what I SHOULD have had done.
Good luck, Bloo. May your awesomeness carry you far into the future.
I've got too much crap going on and the deadlines are just too close to keep up with this tourney and I don't think it'd be fair for any future opponents (in the unlikely event I even got past this round, bloochikin is just too awesome for that) if I kept going. Today I just can't seem to draw anything right and I realised this situation will probably repeat itself for me. I'm too much of a procrastinator.
I'm submitting a page of Roy harrassing some pigeons. Paltry compensation compared with what I SHOULD have had done.
Good luck, Bloo. May your awesomeness carry you far into the future.
# 5
Posted:
Apr 8 2012, 07:50 PM
Stekadarr: Been so busy over the Easter weekend.
Then woke up this morning to find I didn't have the day to work on this, as I thought, but that I had 6 hours.
I'll have something in, I think. Just don't expect it to be any kind of "good" XD
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I know right? School's been kickin' my but. I just spent all day on this to get it in on time. 10:50pm... now to get started on my homework due tomorrow haha.
# 4
Posted:
Apr 8 2012, 06:48 PM
Been so busy over the Easter weekend.
Then woke up this morning to find I didn't have the day to work on this, as I thought, but that I had 6 hours.
I'll have something in, I think. Just don't expect it to be any kind of "good" XD
Then woke up this morning to find I didn't have the day to work on this, as I thought, but that I had 6 hours.
I'll have something in, I think. Just don't expect it to be any kind of "good" XD
# 3
Posted:
Apr 1 2012, 06:16 PM
BURN TO THE GR-BURN BURN TO THE G- WOOOO - BURN TO THE BURN TO THE BURN TO - WOOO - ABB BURN TO THE GROUND.
# 2
Posted:
Apr 1 2012, 04:38 PM
Dam what a great match up. can't wait to see what you guys pull out!
# 1
Posted:
Apr 1 2012, 11:38 AM
Oh this is going to be a hard one to choose, I can feel it. Good luck!
Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Apr 16th, 2012
Votes Cast:
54
Page Views:
1927
Winner:
bl00chikin
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Man, this is grand, it looks and feels like a cartoon and its so lively. You're running hot on all cylinders- lines, colors, dialogue- you're just aces. You've got a style perfectly suited for speedy battles and Roy is a helluva character.
Great dialogue, I love his accent and can totally hear it as your faces are so animated they project. This comic feels massive even though its a bit minimalistic, just simple and clean lines and colors with great expressive headshots. If nothing else, I'd like to see more camera angles and a larger scale battle.