Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 1 / Dion Clark vs. GaoShou

Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 1 / Dion Clark vs. GaoShou

Invitational Tournament 2012: Round 1 — Dion Clark vs. GaoShou

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PyrasTerran
Community Manager
1441 comments
# 22   Posted: Apr 16 2012, 10:06 PM
alot of good looking material but incomplete stories :(

Here's to improvements in future comics~

TINMAN
Artist
140 comments
# 21   Posted: Apr 15 2012, 08:33 PM
Excelsis: Nice screenshots there.

Feelsink: It seems you have a nice style going there and even some cool camera work but it's incomprehensible to follow the action. I dig your lines and tones but in the future strive for clarity and perhaps some more complexity.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 20   Posted: Apr 15 2012, 06:58 PM
excelsis-the art is very nice but there wasn't much to the comic.

Feelsink-this was way better than your design sheet! You had some good shots and pacing in here so I would like to see what you would do with a longer deadline. You'd do yourself a lot of favors by doing digital lettering, because the hand lettering here is kind of messy and hard to read.

Evil Eye
Artist
85 comments
# 19   Posted: Apr 14 2012, 02:45 AM
feelsink: Like Hiemie I noticed that both of them had no idea what was going on, and I actually really loved that.  They've both so utterly disoriented and for such utterly different reasons.  Definitely did get that rushed vibe, though, I feel like you could've built up that whole "they because what in the damn fuck seriously" chaos to have a lot more punch.  I liked your character's bizarre bloodlust (even if it's for her own).  You probably could've fit in a few more characterization beats in the same vein in there.  Let's see what you've got for me in round 2!

excelsis: Consider yourself pre-challenged whenever I get kicked outta the tourney and also finish my story arc or whatever.  It's a matchup that was ordained by the gods.

excelsis
Artist
5 comments
# 18   Posted: Apr 13 2012, 11:52 PM
edited: accidentally doubled the comment

excelsis
Artist
5 comments
# 17   Posted: Apr 13 2012, 11:52 PM
Oh yes. The regrets. I really only had a half hour on the computer this weekend, with Easter and family engagements. I don't wanna bore you, but I definitely messed up a few things... I think I even entered them in the wrong order....

Anyhoo, thanks you for your kind words, and I hope to give you guys what ya want in the future: an actual comic.

Hiemie
Artist
511 comments
# 16   Posted: Apr 11 2012, 11:38 AM
Excel: This is kinda fun, but not entirely a comic. I heard something came up for you, and that's fine. I still feel you coulda did something, even in a day. I don't know why you showed whatever drawing program you used to make this on the splashes though. I hope to see a comic from you eventually, and it's understandable if you put something more important in front of a hobby.

Feelsink: Haha, this was silly. It just seems like both characters were utterly confused on what even happened. It was manic and scribbly, but I enjoyed it. I feel like you just threw this together though in places. I'm looking forward to something more developed from you. (BTW, I loved your post-it design sheet. I think you should paste it under your other one.)

feelsink
Artist
5 comments
# 15   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 11:46 PM
thanks for the advice guys! i will try and apply it to future comicss =D.. good battle excelsis!

Kinu
Artist
150 comments
# 14   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 09:52 PM
Both made me laugh. But Feelsink's got my vote for being a comic.

Wanna see more from you two!

slothvert
Artist
71 comments
# 13   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 07:00 PM
Feelsink, I had a tough time following a lot of the action in your comic. Clarity is kind of a big deal, maybe you can work on that?

Excelsis, I know you just threw this together, but I cracked up anyway. I hope to see more activity from you in the future.

ShouldaCouldaCola
Artist
48 comments
# 12   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 01:58 PM
Feelsinkkkiii.
Ya' did it! That horse is scary.

maa703
Artist
16 comments
# 11   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 10:05 AM
excelsis <3

Fed
Artist
162 comments
# 10   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 10:05 AM
Excelsis: Good drawings, no comic..

feelsink: Nice pacing but no real resolution.. Just stab your next opponent in the face next time ;)

Evil Eye
Artist
85 comments
# 9   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 12:21 AM
You`re both fine.  There`s a bit of a grace period as it takes them time to get the comics uploaded and set up for voting, and also nobody`s online anyway.

Lookin`forward to y`all`s comics.

feelsink
Artist
5 comments
# 8   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 12:09 AM
ahh lol did we just both default... i turned it in kinda late.. like few mins??

excelsis
Artist
5 comments
# 7   Posted: Apr 8 2012, 04:57 PM
This is the lovechild of procrastination and lethargy. Enjoy.

excelsis
Artist
5 comments
# 6   Posted: Apr 8 2012, 10:17 AM
Actually, I might be able to. I just have Easter to get through with the 'rents. I'll enter something, but I probably won't have time to ink & color it. I'll try, though.

Evil Eye
Artist
85 comments
# 5   Posted: Apr 7 2012, 11:44 AM
Aw, man.  I was really looking forward to your character in particular.  Was hoping we'd meet up in a later round.

Oh well.  Good luck with your other engagements, and don't be shy to the idea of just submitting Clark or any other characters you have on the stove through the site the old fashioned way!  The nice thing about having a stable for non-tourney stuff is that it's there for when you have the time to do it.

excelsis
Artist
5 comments
# 4   Posted: Apr 7 2012, 11:15 AM
I won't be able to compete this round due to.... other engagements. I joined this competition on a whim, and now I'm leaving it on one. Apologies and kudos.

Charlie
Artist
730 comments
# 3   Posted: Apr 1 2012, 06:14 PM
This battle is like mulan, but its not.

GOOD RUCK.

DelBarrio
Artist
426 comments
# 2   Posted: Apr 1 2012, 05:24 PM
Two tough chicks goin' at it! I look forward to this. ;]

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 1   Posted: Apr 1 2012, 11:36 AM
feelsink, let's see what you can do!

Good luck excelsis!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Apr 16th, 2012
Votes Cast: 45
Page Views: 967
Winner: feelsink
 

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