My only issue occurs on pages 11 to 13.
On 11 and 12, Julia is on Angie's left-hand side, and holds her left hand even. But on page 13, they switch places suddenly.
Aside from this blooper, the delivery is fantastic as always and most importantly is heartfelt. If you can invoke an emotion from the reader, to me, it trumps any trope or cliché a story may use.
Can't wait to see what's on the horizon for Angie

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