Intro Story / Izanami

Intro Story / Izanami

Intro Story — Izanami

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JCee
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407 comments

# 7 Posted: Oct 27 2011, 01:21 PM

*looks at it again and again* ... ... oh wait. They are. Yes, he's restraining her from behind. Sorry, I used to place thumbs on the wrong side back when I started drawing.

Fearn
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366 comments

# 6 Posted: Oct 27 2011, 07:29 AM

Tatsura:
mintley: looks pretty good! but on the second page's first panel - your thumbs are on the wrong side!
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Awww damn you're correct! How did I not notice that!? *facepalm*

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errrr... No, they are on the correct side? provided he turned her around and he is holding her from behind? At least that's how it reads for me

JCee
Artist

407 comments

# 5 Posted: Oct 26 2011, 10:41 PM

Funfetus: The pages look great! I wish we got more of a sense of who the character is, though. Looking forward to seeing more!

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Don't worry, when Iza gets her first battle you'll be able to see what she's like.

Funfetus
Artist

19 comments

# 4 Posted: Oct 26 2011, 09:05 PM

The pages look great! I wish we got more of a sense of who the character is, though. Looking forward to seeing more!

JCee
Artist

407 comments

# 3 Posted: Oct 26 2011, 08:10 PM

mintley: looks pretty good! but on the second page's first panel - your thumbs are on the wrong side!

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Awww damn you're correct! How did I not notice that!? *facepalm*

Minteh
Global Moderator

273 comments

# 2 Posted: Oct 26 2011, 07:04 PM

looks pretty good! but on the second page's first panel - your thumbs are on the wrong side!

Geekpower
Artist

19 comments

# 1 Posted: Oct 26 2011, 06:18 PM

good start! looking forward for more.

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