Enzeru vs. Sonny del Salvador

Enzeru vs. Sonny del Salvador

Enzeru vs. Sonny del Salvador

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Cracking Skulls
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# 13   Posted: Aug 30 2011, 06:45 PM
Great to see your first battle, neon!

I'll echo what kent said and say I like your style and method of shading, and I do like the expressions you gave the characters. The paneling and pacing I particularly liked, so hope to see some of that in future comics.

I believe that there were too many close up head shots in this comic though, it'd be nice to maybe distance the characters away a bit more next time. The ending was a kind of abrupt for my tastes. Sonny falls from a high point in the sky, then suddenly just stops I guess. Did he land safely? Did that Spirit orb save him? It was confusing and could have been better explained with a maybe two more panels showing how he landed.

Overall, it was alright. Hope to see more from you!

Neon Prime
Artist
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# 12   Posted: Aug 30 2011, 02:25 PM
Thanks Kent...glad you enjoyed it!

Mister Kent
Artist
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# 11   Posted: Aug 29 2011, 10:55 PM
I really enjoyed the style of this, particularly the shading--also, some of the expressions were pretty fun. Can't wait to read more from you.

Neon Prime
Artist
8 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 24 2011, 06:49 PM
wow...thanks fox! bruce willis rocks..the fifth element and die hard were sweet! those action  movies really  clean up at the box office and everyone involved gets to laugh the whole way to the bank;) glad you enjoyed it Mrnoitaull and stay tuned for more monochromactic madness!!

Fox24
Artist
215 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 24 2011, 08:23 AM
any more one liners and it might have been a bruce willis movie. A little more thought into dialog.

Darius Corry
Artist
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# 8   Posted: Aug 23 2011, 12:50 PM
A bit fast paced, but I enjoyed it. I'll always enjoy monochromatic pages.

Good stuff, Neon

Coatl
Artist
320 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 21 2011, 10:04 PM
I'm gonna say this ahead of time but due to family things, I might not submit by the deadline but if I don't I'll submit as a BB.

Still, it doesn't excuse the fact that I took 5 weeks to do this, and it's irresponsible. However, I'm gonna take the heat.

Coatl
Artist
320 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 3 2011, 11:34 AM
not much time left. this story's been a challenge to write, screw it, gonna pencil my first pages today.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 31 2011, 08:49 PM
I figured out your problem Neon Prime. Rename all of your files, the uploader doesn't accept special characters so the "#" in the filename isn't allowing you to upload the pages.

Angie
Council
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# 4   Posted: Jul 27 2011, 08:26 AM
Neon Prime your pages don't work, if they're too large the uploader won't take them.

*edit-still broken. You can review your upload under Manager:Upload a comic and you should be able to review your upload there.

Iketeruguy
Artist
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# 3   Posted: Jul 21 2011, 07:28 AM
Cool.  Looking forward to seeing you two throw down.

Ten Dead Kings
Artist
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# 2   Posted: Jul 19 2011, 04:38 AM
Well. This should be interesting.

William_Duel
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943 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 18 2011, 10:42 PM
Surprise surprise!

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Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Aug 29th, 2011
Votes Cast: 17
Page Views: 1438
Winner: Neon Prime
 

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