Massimo and Max vs. Doodle Dan

Massimo and Max vs. Doodle Dan

Massimo and Max vs. Doodle Dan

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Mister Kent
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946 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 6 2011, 08:16 AM
I must say, Massimo is adorable (and adorably badass) in both of these comics!

Roger, I love the faces in yours, especially the last panel of page 1 and the following epic panel. I'd love to see what you can do next time if you have more time, because I wanted more!

Sean, I noticed some pretty cool things in your comic--I enjoyed the lines on Sketchy when he was in motion, that was pretty cool, and your musclebound Massimo was entertaining. The bottom of the one page, where there are just heads attached to balloons--I'd advise against doing that again, because I think it hurt the overall presentation and really could have used more panels. Overall, I see some improvement, so keep it up!

Roger_mild
Artist
24 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 9 2011, 02:54 PM
Thanks and I wish you luck in a greater or equal value sir  : D

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 9 2011, 08:17 AM
aww yeh, good luck!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 9 2011, 12:14 AM
Good luck you two!

Sean Patrick Kelly
Artist
117 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 8 2011, 11:19 PM
Hey Roger, I ordered you a can of ASS Wope! Expect it in the mail in 15 days!!!

...also good luck

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Aug 6th, 2011
Votes Cast: 13
Page Views: 857
Winner: Sean Patrick Kelly
 

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