Intro Story / Thrones & Paulo

Intro Story / Thrones & Paulo

Intro Story — Thrones & Paulo

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anonymous
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# 3   Posted: Jun 7 2011, 08:59 PM
Cool, a new character; knock' em dead.

DelBarrio
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# 2   Posted: Jun 7 2011, 11:35 AM
Hey, I'm liking these characters of yours! Dig the mellow humor.

One thing that really stands out to me are the shifts in quality from panel to panel. Are you creating each panel as a separate image then tossing them together? There are some really odd compression issues in your pages that blurs your artwork and makes it difficult to read some of the text. Try to keep your panels more consistent in this regard, it will make for an overall better looking comic!

Avoid using super obvious filters (like the lens flare). Keep workin' on that painty look- it seems to suit your characters and their style pretty well. One more tip- I can see the white pixelated lines surrounding your artwork. That can easily be avoided if you keep your lines on a separate layer (set to multiply or something similar), then color on the layers under the linework.

Good job on getting in. I look forward to seeing more from you. :)

E.W. Schneider
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1055 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 7 2011, 06:07 AM
Hey, congrats on getting in! Can't wait to see you battle finally!

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