Edgar Grimsette vs. Corry

Edgar Grimsette vs. Corry

Edgar Grimsette vs. Corry

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Fox24
Artist
215 comments
# 12   Posted: Jun 20 2011, 12:34 PM
sorry I meant krat

Fox24
Artist
215 comments
# 11   Posted: Jun 20 2011, 12:34 PM
This battle had potential, but I felt like I was pulling for it and then I was like, ugh crap.

M: can't be mad at you, again I guess technical difficulties, or something but still even the pages you had I really wanted something out of it; especially from the dialog. I wish you would do something a little darker and give it some extreme contrast and maybe just go all out dark for one or two battles. There is a range of you that I don't think you've tapped into yet with your ink washes and your dialog. With Suit I saw it coming out but just scratched the surface I know there is more emph and twists and great story telling you can do even with limited pages. You got it next time Bro.

Kral: it was cool, nothing much I can say about it. It just lacked really any depth other than your characters low self esteem and self anger. I just wish there were something your character was working towards that would really draw the reader in. Your art is great, just wish there was a story that wasn't so cut and dry really.

Darius Corry
Artist
428 comments
# 10   Posted: Jun 19 2011, 09:06 AM
POOP! How'd I forget to upload two whole pages. . . . crap, man!

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 9   Posted: Jun 19 2011, 07:14 AM
I can't start my computer due to a videocard issue so I don't have access to the Void FTP. Hopefully it'll be fixed in the next day or so, these things really shouldn't happen when I work all weekend. Because of this I can't do thumbnails.

Darius Corry
Artist
428 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 18 2011, 11:59 PM
yeah ditto, man. I did not finish. 2nd from the last page wasn't submitted but i hope u all grasp the sequence. Like Krat said it's something. .

Uploaded

Sid_Bane
Artist
53 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 18 2011, 10:32 PM
Uploaded. Apologies for the last page. I had some difficulties in real life and in the process of making this, but I at least got something up.

Darius Corry
Artist
428 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 18 2011, 09:17 PM
of course when I get down to the wire, my net starts acting up.
conspiracy!

Sid_Bane
Artist
53 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 8 2011, 08:14 PM
Oh yeah, that's fine. I've had to do a project for a printmaking class which took up a lot of time, so an extension is all right by me.

Darius Corry
Artist
428 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 8 2011, 07:05 PM
Hey Ill be without my sketchbook for two days so which I really need, so I'm going to extend for a couple extra days, but I'm not using the full week.

Sorry Krat.

Coatl
Artist
318 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 8 2011, 03:41 PM
Good luck guys, make sure to outdo each other.

Orion
Artist
213 comments
# 2   Posted: May 18 2011, 01:56 PM
Here we go! Can't wait to see what comes up. :)

Darius Corry
Artist
428 comments
# 1   Posted: May 14 2011, 06:46 AM
So glad to be back in the battling pool, but man where the HECK am I going to go with this guy.

Thanks for taking interest Krat and I look forward to your story.

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Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Jun 25th, 2011
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