Thanks! Yeah, I can see what you mean about the backgrounds. I won't be doing any sort of toning since this has already been sent off to the printers. It's something I might try if I do another book though!

Awwww, this was too adorable

I really liked the expressions in this and the story was very cute. Do you plan to ever use toning for these comics? I do like your black and white work, but I feel the blank backgrounds in some panels sort of begin to become too dominating? if that makes sense? Like on the panels of pages 5 and 12 it feels like the backgrounds are waaay to empty and the negative space sort of begins to take over and it's not very easy on the eyes sometimes. I feel like in needs something there either lines of the walls of the room or a tone, soooomething. Other than that though this was good. Thanks for the cute read!

Glad to hear it!

Thanks Angie... This was definitely chicken soup for my soul...

Thanks a lot! It was a blast to work on

Overall I think it was great to see a new side of the character over all the different chapters as well as see a different sort of art style experimentation from you. I think it added a lot more depth to Angie and it was cool to see her in the off time.

Nice job!

And that's it for the mini comics! These will be available for purchase in book form too which also has a print only chapter, when they're available I'll be posting a link on the forums on where to get them. For those waiting for actual story stuff/proper comics from me, a few are in the works so stay tuned!

Thanks While I hadn't wanted to put them on Void initially because they didn't seem to belong, it felt kind of wrong not to put them up. It'll be nice to get feedback based on each chapter as a whole instead of from a page every few days.

I'll just comment on this one but I think its nice you're putting these up on VOID! I think you'll probably get a lot more feedback now that all pages are able to be read on the main site.

Just read http://entervoid.com/comic.php?id=3775 my first comment for the explanation of what these are. Toast suggested each chapter be a separate comic. The last chapter should hopefully line up with the release date of the book.

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