angieness: I like the expressive work you have been doing lately, but sometimes I have a hard time telling what is foreground and what is background. For instance, on the first page the sky and the ground are the same tone, making the sky just a little lighter would have helped there be a more clear separation between the two. The problem persists throughout most of the comic. Definitely keep working with those brushes though, the expressiveness works very nicely for you.
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Thanks a lot for poiting that out - accidently my girfriend told me the same thing, but since she didn't use the sandwitch I reacted defencifly and told her to "go away".
The reason why tone variation is so messed up is because I'm not used to the medium. To be honest the biggest reason why I can improve is because thanks to art school my ideology is changing e.g. I wouldn't consider trying out new methods two years ago.
When I get to finish Awesomre Revege part 2 it will be all done like that but I won't be messing around with color shemes since my girfriend told me it looks better - if she only knew how to tell me that without ripping me anew one XD
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