Massimo and Max vs. Leland

Massimo and Max vs. Leland

Massimo and Max vs. Leland

48.7%
252 points
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by Zest

51.3%
265 points
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Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 16   Posted: Apr 9 2011, 12:45 PM
FFS people, why are there only 8 votes on this comic? SERIOUSLY. VOTE. The comics get put up for a reason:I

anonymous
91 comments
# 15   Posted: Apr 7 2011, 06:55 PM
Good job guys, what I was going to say has already been said. So on that note keep up the hard work and continue to improve.

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 14   Posted: Apr 5 2011, 11:45 PM
Roger: Getting better, yes, but you're lacking in comic formatting and panel layout, and backgrounds. Work on your like widths, and also, consistent text. Keep up the improvement!

Zest: Pretty good. Watch your line widths, and keep up with the quality of line throughout. The text in the middle felt a little out of place. I know it was supposed to be a text/story book font, but it seemed more out of place than fitting.

and of course, DON'T FORGET TO RESIZE! haha

DelBarrio
Artist
426 comments
# 13   Posted: Apr 5 2011, 11:10 AM
Both comics were simple and solid story-wise. Very cute and fun. :>

Roger: I can see quite a bit of improvement. Your figures and lines look more solid. Definitely work on your backgrounds, though. You have lots of little details in your simple characters- try to toss in some more detail in your backgrounds as well. Also pleeease try to make your dialogue text a bit more uniform in size. There were a few parts where it got so tiny I wasn't able to read all of the words. :C

Zesty: Thems some big pages, bro. LOL. Complete opposite issue I had with Roger's comic. The text was enormous. That accident aside- your story was cute. "Die in a fire, please." I lol'd. Your lines got a bit messy at the end, gotta watch that. Also, backgrounds. When I got to the last page, I thought the carpet fibers were grass blades and I was like "...when did they get outside?" :T Try to make your backdrops a bit more clear if you're not gonna be using color to make 'em pop.

Zest
Artist
141 comments
# 12   Posted: Apr 5 2011, 09:58 AM
Also, holy crap I forgot to shrink these pages down. D: My apologies, Void.

Zest
Artist
141 comments
# 11   Posted: Apr 5 2011, 09:55 AM
Ahaha Roger, your comic was great! I love your take on Leland. C:

Roger_mild
Artist
24 comments
# 10   Posted: Apr 3 2011, 03:03 AM
In comparison to the last one I did here on void I did better. Overall I've grown a lot not only as an comic artist but an artist in general. I'm having so much fun I don't care if I lose   : D

I'm proud of myself and excited to see AmanitaZest's take on Massimo and Max

Roger_mild
Artist
24 comments
# 9   Posted: Apr 3 2011, 03:03 AM

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 28 2011, 11:56 AM
Finally!

Roger_mild
Artist
24 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 11:32 PM
Woo!

Roger_mild
Artist
24 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 11:32 PM
I'm pumped, theres a pink sticky note on my computer so I won't forget

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 11:29 PM
Okay, Roger, if you don't do something good, I WILL PUNCH YOU IN THE DICK I SWEAR TO GOD

DelBarrio
Artist
426 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 09:00 PM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

William_Duel
Community Manager
929 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 08:11 PM
Unexpectedly unexpected.

Orion
Artist
211 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 07:42 PM
Finally! Lets rock this!

Zest
Artist
141 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 07:32 PM
All right, it's ON.

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Apr 11th, 2011
Votes Cast: 14
Page Views: 955
Winner: Zest
 

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