Pandora vs. Charlie

Pandora vs. Charlie

Pandora vs. Charlie

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Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 35   Posted: Mar 28 2011, 12:01 AM
Damn! That is quite intimidating. Sweet details and action!
Sometimes the dialogue is a lil overwhelming when their mushed together, but damn again awesome comic.
If i don't make it in this tourney, i'll be rooting for you. (and 4 others)

Keep up the goods.

Sheldon, - Whatever happened, i understand.
I'm sure it would've been nuts! Was nice to see you in action again still.

anonymous
91 comments
# 34   Posted: Mar 26 2011, 07:22 PM
TODK I love you style so much with or without color, it still blows my mind.. Your line work was amazing to me and great way to tie the end of the J.J. battle with this one. Excellent work.

The One Dark Knight
Artist
128 comments
# 33   Posted: Mar 24 2011, 11:10 AM
Thanks guys!

Sheldon: You bastard, how dare you prioritize work over BATTLE COMIX. You owe me a rematch in the future.
Pyras: Thanks very much, haha, I'll make sure to turn it up to 11 next time.
Kevin: Cheers, I cracked out most of this comic about 5 days before the deadline, so I didn't have time to tone or color which usually can compensate for how weak my lines tend to get on these short deadlines. I'll definitely use it as an opportunity to shape them up.
Pon: Haha thanks man, I don't think I'm quite on the same beast mode level that Sheldon is but I'm trying.

PONBIKI
Artist
184 comments
# 32   Posted: Mar 24 2011, 06:12 AM
For a second there I thoughtthat first page was Sheldon's for sure. But I was wrong
Todk amazing illusion. By far one of my favorite so far. Keep on trucking.

Kevin Birtcher
Allfather
289 comments
# 31   Posted: Mar 22 2011, 09:15 PM
Sheldon: You make me a sad panda.

TODK: Well done, sir.  Action, comedy, drama, and you continued both your own and Sheldon's story.  My only crit is the linework is real loose and kinda sloppy.  The JJ match looked much cleaner and tighter than this, so I docked you some Quality points.  Still, very entertaining.

sheldon
Artist
141 comments
# 30   Posted: Mar 22 2011, 06:59 PM
Tom, you're amazing. And I really can't tell you how SORRY I am. Absolutely shit by me, brother. All I can say is "real work" (using the term in the loosest fashion possible) demanded my full attention. I owe you one chief.

In all honesty, I don't think i could have beaten you if i tried haha. You're a lean mean machine of the comics making variety my friend.

PyrasTerran
Global Moderator
1458 comments
# 29   Posted: Mar 22 2011, 05:28 PM
Hands down: Pandora and her comics = one of the best things about Void.

10.10.10

I can't think of better action drawn and written in the tournament so far.

If I had to have something that would improve it to an 11, it would be a larger variety of line widths to show depth of objects and environments, because one can easily get lost in the sea of details if they're not paying attention.

The One Dark Knight
Artist
128 comments
# 28   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 01:27 PM
Haha thanks for pointing that out, Wolcik, I originally had Charlie actually catching one of the missiles the police cruiser fired in his mouth, and spitting it back out. I guess along the way I overlooked that little plot hole when I changed it. CURSES.

I had to scan about half of this on another person's scanner, all but one or two pages was actually done about 4 days early since I had to ditch my apartment for Oregon to visit friends, so I wasn't able to tone this one ;_;

Thanks for the feedback though!

Cheers :D

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 27   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 01:08 PM
TODK - Amazing story, and especially since you grasphed Charlie's from last round really great. When Pandora turned into defensive mode things got a little complicated for me - her emotional status changed somehow in the way she moved and her expressions - was it because of the program, the action she was doing or sudden change of personality?
Ending was ridiculous - very nice and compleing, but leaving us with the same brain scratching idea that all plot-twists when your best friend that help you tear down half the evil organisation turns out to be the bad guy and owner of it that will now try to kill you, and not 500 times before when he saved protogonist's ass - if they could get out of that situation so easely why postpone it? Then again it's Charlie and he could be restoring it as a final solution thing.

Sheldon: I was expecting at least 2 doodled pages, cause it would justify it all - just seeing you put some pro panel layouts even without any actual story.

DelBarrio
Artist
426 comments
# 26   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 11:53 AM
DK: That was a REALLY fun read. So enjoyably silly and action-packed! Really don't have much to say in terms of crits other than it got a bit messy at times. Lots and lots of little details and no line widths or colors to separate them can turn kinda mucky, but it didn't take away from the story flow. Excellent, sir. <3

Sheldon: Bummer, bro.

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 25   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 10:57 AM
Tom, I already told you how fucking badass yours was. Just needs some cleaning up a tad.

Sheldon... well... I kinda expected it.

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 24   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 10:53 AM
That sad face must mean you won't marry me. :(

The One Dark Knight
Artist
128 comments
# 23   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 10:52 AM
):

Iketeruguy
Artist
220 comments
# 22   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 10:29 AM
Great work again!

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 21   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 09:33 AM
TODK, you rock. I love you, MARRY ME.

I was pretty disappointed to see nothing from Sheldon though too.

Duredhel
Artist
114 comments
# 20   Posted: Mar 21 2011, 09:31 AM
Oh man...
I came >__>

Knomer
Artist
87 comments
# 19   Posted: Mar 20 2011, 05:54 PM
The One Dark Knight: UPLOADED

YEAAAAAAAAAAH BROTHERRR
Quote

!!!!!!!!

The One Dark Knight
Artist
128 comments
# 18   Posted: Mar 20 2011, 03:17 PM
UPLOADED

YEAAAAAAAAAAH BROTHERRR

William_Duel
Community Manager
942 comments
# 17   Posted: Mar 20 2011, 11:18 AM
This may be the greatest battle ever...or not?

sixtem
Artist
395 comments
# 16   Posted: Mar 12 2011, 08:01 PM
Hnnnnnngh my nutbladder --

anonymous
91 comments
# 15   Posted: Mar 10 2011, 11:38 PM
I'm ready to have my mind blown!!!!........ thank you in advance ~.~)

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 14   Posted: Mar 8 2011, 09:49 AM
My brain cannot contain the levels of awesome being generated.

Cracking Skulls
Artist
348 comments
# 13   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 04:16 PM
Shit's gonna get real.

DelBarrio
Artist
426 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 12:55 PM
Beautiful~

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 11:54 AM
TODK GOT THE BATTLE I WANTED haha.

Put on a good show dudes!

justarhymes
Web Dev
654 comments
# 10   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 11:30 AM
TODK is battling against his future self o:

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 10:29 AM
fuh-huuuh-uck!

Craqued
Artist
202 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 09:42 AM
AVENGE MEEEEEEE ROBOCHIX 4 LYFE

this is
gonna be
sick

Fetus Man
Artist
94 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 09:33 AM
Oh my goodness oh my goodness

Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 09:20 AM
I expect awesome and nothing less than that.

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 08:09 AM
FUCKING. YES.

Christmas came early!

Good luck you two!

The One Dark Knight
Artist
128 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 07:26 AM
fuck.

COMIX OVERDRIVE MODE. ENGAGE.

BERSERKER MODE ACTIVATE

Slagglle
Artist
61 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 06:56 AM
Holy shit.

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 05:29 AM
Crash of the Titans, or what?

Make your parents proud XD

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1061 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 05:14 AM
Oh Charlie's gonna be grossing out.

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Mar 27th, 2011
Votes Cast: 42
Page Views: 2299
Winner: The One Dark Knight
 

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