Awesome Revenge / Worltex
Critiques & Comments
anonymous
91 comments
# 7
Posted:
Mar 4 2011, 09:14 PM
I'm waiting to see what happens next.
# 6
Posted:
Mar 4 2011, 03:19 AM
Mrnoitaull:
As you have probably noticed Worltex is inactive character now, so... I don't know how it works in Corry's behalf XD
London:
What that suppose to mean? Which balls? They suppose to be Worltex's weapons
William_Duel:
Lines were done last year and colors just now - I decided to not lineart and just move on with the story.
To be honest the last page was added after everything was done, as ending with just them facing each other would be less climaxing. It's just a quick edited photo, but it helps the story more than it helps the art XD
A. J!:
I decided to make Awesome's version of Awesome Revenge a two parter, because I already have half of it drawn and inked. New lines would probably be much better, but that would mean new lines would have worse score because of those I already have. Also I'd like to try diffrent coloring tactic with new lines, and so I need to wait after the tourney.
If I won't make part 1 by the end of the weekend then expect it in the next tourney break
As you have probably noticed Worltex is inactive character now, so... I don't know how it works in Corry's behalf XD
London:
What that suppose to mean? Which balls? They suppose to be Worltex's weapons
William_Duel:
Lines were done last year and colors just now - I decided to not lineart and just move on with the story.
To be honest the last page was added after everything was done, as ending with just them facing each other would be less climaxing. It's just a quick edited photo, but it helps the story more than it helps the art XD
A. J!:
I decided to make Awesome's version of Awesome Revenge a two parter, because I already have half of it drawn and inked. New lines would probably be much better, but that would mean new lines would have worse score because of those I already have. Also I'd like to try diffrent coloring tactic with new lines, and so I need to wait after the tourney.
If I won't make part 1 by the end of the weekend then expect it in the next tourney break
# 5
Posted:
Mar 3 2011, 10:47 PM
The balls are inert
# 4
Posted:
Mar 3 2011, 06:56 PM
Most of this is pretty good and probably the best work I have seen from you but on page 04, your weaknesses come to light. A lot of these pages you draw faces head on but your heads at an angle need some work. Often enough on page four people don't have enough space and their faces are kinda scrunched. IT's good to see you experiment with panels on that page but it needs more room to breathe, the lack of gutter space that lets all the panels flow together looks somewhat wierd. And the last page I'm not too fond of. It's certainly an easy out and you ran the city scape through some filters but it doesn't look like it belongs to the rest of the comic.
# 3
Posted:
Mar 3 2011, 03:15 PM
Im loving how you are joining together Worltex and Awesome in the same story man.
I really want to see where the plot leads...well done, bro!
I really want to see where the plot leads...well done, bro!
# 2
Posted:
Mar 3 2011, 09:16 AM
eery how this is working in Corry's behalf.
stay tuned
stay tuned
# 1
Posted:
Mar 3 2011, 04:41 AM
This is kinda preview for Awesome's part, but this one was much quicker to finish than the other BB.
Some lines are a little bellow, but that's because I had them waiting to be colored for some time. At least I tried new coloring style I learnt in the tourney
Some lines are a little bellow, but that's because I had them waiting to be colored for some time. At least I tried new coloring style I learnt in the tourney
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