Gypsy Moth vs. Octavian

Gypsy Moth vs. Octavian

Gypsy Moth vs. Octavian

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Iketeruguy
Artist
220 comments
# 26   Posted: Apr 12 2011, 10:15 AM
That stinks, man.  I understand that stuff happens, it's cool.  I'm just bummed for you that you don't get credit for this fight.  I'm still excited to see it whenever you get to upload it as a Beyond Battle.  Thanks again for the challenge!  Gypsy Moth was fun to draw!

alberto311
Artist
350 comments
# 25   Posted: Apr 12 2011, 09:30 AM
Hi guys,

I'm finally pulling my head out of the sand... I'm good thanks mrnoitaull. My scanner took a crap.... Which totally pissed me off, as I took the day off work and pumped out five pages....that day for a total of eight.... And even though it was gonna be only pencils... I was totally stoked because I tried a style I've never done before....

So I'm really sorry Stephen, I'm really freaking bummed.... But I'll ink and send it up by next week, and if you want I can take some pics and send them to you to prove I had them done....

Anyway I am totally impressed with yours. You definitely deserve the win. You told so much with the limited amount of pages... Look for mine next week... Peace.

Iketeruguy
Artist
220 comments
# 24   Posted: Apr 8 2011, 09:58 PM
I had intended this to be longer, but with all the false starts I was running out of time to dedicate to my tournament fight so that had to take precedence over the length of this comic.  As it is I only left myself four days to come up with something to put up against Rtv, so I've got my work cut out for me there.

Anyway, thanks for the comments so far, I'll definitely try to keep the critiques in mind as I produce more work.

Mr. Kent:  I'm happy you're pleased with my inclusion of the Orphanage gallery and your characters.  I enjoyed drawing them all hope to include the Orphanage heavily in Octavian's story line if it's ok with you and the rest of that gang.  I'd like to talk to you guys about that so I know I'm not stepping on anyone's toes in my writing.

anonymous
91 comments
# 23   Posted: Apr 7 2011, 08:06 PM
I also wish it was a little longer (thats what she said :P ) your drawing style and story telling is great.


P.S. lol sorry couldn't help myself.

Mister Kent
Artist
947 comments
# 22   Posted: Apr 7 2011, 07:11 PM
I'm with Fern--Octavian is quite the looker! :D I do like your clean lines, and love how smoothly you draw action. Wish it was a little longer, though--you were just getting started! In the next comics, I'd like to see more story development to match the nice visuals. Nice to see the Orphanage's Gallery get some more screentime, and you draw a great Todd and Bathin, by the way.

PyrasTerran
Global Moderator
1444 comments
# 21   Posted: Apr 7 2011, 06:48 PM
It's double-default day!

Iketeru: Great stuff :) It looks like you missed cleaning some lines up in the first page, that's my only real gripe. Keep up the good work!

Darius Corry
Artist
428 comments
# 20   Posted: Apr 7 2011, 02:05 PM
nice clean stuff, IketeruGuy as always. I appreciate simple.

I hope alberto is ok cus he said he wasn't defaulting....so yeah

Coatl
Artist
318 comments
# 19   Posted: Apr 7 2011, 08:43 AM
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Coatl
Artist
318 comments
# 18   Posted: Apr 7 2011, 08:43 AM
not again, alberto. dissappointing. :/

Fearn
Artist
352 comments
# 17   Posted: Apr 7 2011, 08:39 AM
Whoa Octavian looks like a hottie! His arms on page 2 panel 2, mmmm... I am probably just being very weird.

Anyway, nice comic! Short but sweet, I hope you will continue the storyline!

Zest
Artist
141 comments
# 16   Posted: Apr 7 2011, 08:26 AM
Woah, nice work, Iketeru! I really love those inks, great fluid lines and all. Word balloons are a little overstuffed, though- the first page, for example, with that huge bubble. Even just breaking that up into small bubbles might make it seem less overwhelming.

Iketeruguy
Artist
220 comments
# 15   Posted: Apr 6 2011, 07:35 PM
Good luck, man!  Can't wait to see it!

alberto311
Artist
350 comments
# 14   Posted: Apr 6 2011, 05:45 PM
Congrats Stephen... And just as a heads up I scrapped everything I was doing because I was totally unhappy with the inconsistencies in my art... It was pretty fucking horrible actually.... So I restarted everything yesterday.... Hahaaha.... I'm pretty happy with the choice I made... Unfortunately I wish I had an extra day... But oh well... Not defaulting... Just wish for the extra day.... I think you'll be shock with the direction I took.... No hints...just wait and see.... Still drawing...it'll come down to the wire... Good luck...

I think you should get the win....

Iketeruguy
Artist
220 comments
# 13   Posted: Apr 6 2011, 04:05 PM
Uploaded.  The fourth page is actually just the first page of my second idea that I cut.  It featured Octavian meeting Alixa at an arcade after meeting her online, she poisons his drink, he passes out and then RTV captures him.  I decided I hated it and scrapped it.  The actual comic is actually the third idea I had which is a better, abridged version of my first idea that I wanted to dovetail from Gypsy Moth VS Todd Susser.  Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy it!

alberto311
Artist
350 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 31 2011, 10:04 AM
Rtv03: This is taking centuries!
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Oh man it has been forever.... Shit better get started..... Also wonder con this weekend in San Francisco....woo7!

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 30 2011, 05:11 AM
This is taking centuries!

alberto311
Artist
350 comments
# 10   Posted: Mar 28 2011, 06:27 PM
Stephen Brock: Extended...though if I'd known it would have tacked the seven days on from right now I would've just waited a day.  Oh well, here we go!

alberto311: Yay...no default.... Hope you get better... Looking forward to yours... Mine will probably be nothing to write home about. Laugh.
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I will totally write my parents about it.
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Hahahahh I'll try to keep it clean then!

Iketeruguy
Artist
220 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 28 2011, 02:24 PM
Extended...though if I'd known it would have tacked the seven days on from right now I would've just waited a day.  Oh well, here we go!

alberto311: Yay...no default.... Hope you get better... Looking forward to yours... Mine will probably be nothing to write home about. Laugh.
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I will totally write my parents about it.

alberto311
Artist
350 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 28 2011, 12:42 PM
Stephen Brock: Just letting everyone know I'll likely be extending this one.  Not gonna lie, I've had some trouble fleshing out my original idea into something I actually wanted to do so I'm going back to the drawing board.  I might not need it, but like I said it's likely I will.

No default though!
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Yay...no default.... Hope you get better... Looking forward to yours... Mine will probably be nothing to write home about. Laugh.

Iketeruguy
Artist
220 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 28 2011, 09:19 AM
Just letting everyone know I'll likely be extending this one.  Not gonna lie, I've had some trouble fleshing out my original idea into something I actually wanted to do so I'm going back to the drawing board.  I might not need it, but like I said it's likely I will.

No default though!

Iketeruguy
Artist
220 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 06:27 AM
Rtv03: Man o man, too good to be true. I hope there's no default on this.!
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Ha!  Me too!

Thanks for the challenge, Al.  Looking forward to it as well.

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 05:28 AM
That should be ineresting battle. Good luck!

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 7 2011, 05:08 AM
Man o man, too good to be true. I hope there's no default on this.!

Charlie
Artist
730 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 6 2011, 03:08 PM
Good luck guys!

alberto311
Artist
350 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 6 2011, 03:02 PM
Thanks Roflqu.... Looking forward to this.....

Good luck Iketeruguy.... Looking forward to your work!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 2 2011, 02:21 PM
Yeaaaah. Octavian, right on. Can't wait to see you guys work it.

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