Felix Faulkner vs. Katinka

Felix Faulkner vs. Katinka

Felix Faulkner vs. Katinka

by graten

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by Krissy

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Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 23   Posted: Apr 6 2011, 03:38 PM
Pretty sweet for the short amount of time it was done in. If the first page was supposed to be there, the nonlinear thing threw me a little. Beyond that, no real complaints other than I like your quality stuff more I think. Think I'd would rather see something you spend your time on more next time if you've got the time to devote.

anonymous
91 comments
# 22   Posted: Apr 3 2011, 09:49 PM
Great style DJ Neko, I would just say clean up the lettering a little. Other than that I love the fact that you draw you own word bubbles and do your own lettering! You had some pretty cool angles as well.

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 21   Posted: Apr 3 2011, 08:49 PM
DJ Neko, your drawings and pages/panels are pretty awesome..., please just keep em coming.  I think you have a strong recipe for good comics here, so I'm excited to see you apply this in the future with more working time!

Orion
Artist
212 comments
# 20   Posted: Apr 1 2011, 10:41 AM
A Fabio Tentacle Headed D&D Nerd with a Sword. I like this. :D

Coatl
Artist
318 comments
# 19   Posted: Apr 1 2011, 08:48 AM
well this will be a funny scar to keep for eternity

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 18   Posted: Mar 31 2011, 11:15 AM
rushed art and frenetic almost manic pacing obviously due to the time constraints you mentioned...but good energy and a fun comic

Krissy
Artist
105 comments
# 17   Posted: Mar 31 2011, 05:54 AM
Thanks to those who commented so far even if its a default. The main goal here because I had unintentionally put myself on a time constraint was to get the humor to cross. From what I see, its funny certainly, but of course execution visually is always key. I always feel like I will get one aspect down but everything else suffers--

When I focus too much on quality its not fun/funny to read. When I work on the actual entertainment the quality suffers because I haven't found that healthy medium yet. Also: Colored work is rough for me because I'm so bad at planning my time, doesn't mean I'll try tricks to get around to having colored pieces but damn.

Mister Kent
Artist
947 comments
# 16   Posted: Mar 30 2011, 11:55 PM
Can't wait to see how Graten uses this one :D A very entertaining comic DJ Neko--I can't wait to see more from you/collab at some point. I really like your colored work, so I hope to see more of that soon.

Charlie
Artist
730 comments
# 15   Posted: Mar 30 2011, 09:21 PM
Haha man, I wish you didn't rush this one so much because this comic was really funny. It would have been nice to see it with the time used to its full. At the very least it was really entertaining though :)

Also boo defaults :(

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
1441 comments
# 14   Posted: Mar 30 2011, 06:57 PM
So Felix is now a tentacled nerd who gets muscly fabio in the moonlight. What a $%&#ed up child XD

Graten: What happened! D:

DJ: Not bad for 9 hours, better than I coulda done that's for sure.

Fred v2.0.1
Artist
498 comments
# 13   Posted: Mar 30 2011, 06:22 PM
I think it's pretty obvious what's wrong here, all messy and rushed and confusing, but still, amazingly funny.

Graten, the octopus god is not proud!

Krissy
Artist
105 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 29 2011, 11:03 PM
Posted my comic guys--with recent events going on in the world I've had to put things aside for a good chunk of this month. This comic was done in the past 9 hours.

graten
Artist
16 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 19 2011, 06:39 PM
Ahhhh okay, that makes sense : )

Ten Dead Kings
Artist
269 comments
# 10   Posted: Mar 19 2011, 02:07 AM
Graten: Ahh I don't know why he's considered "inactive" =.=; but I've been working on this fight...

Also, we got our Internets back :D
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Well, since Le Fred won your last fight, youll have to change Felix's design sheet to show the new tentacle hair he has,
then the inactive status goes away.

graten
Artist
16 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 18 2011, 08:26 PM
Ahh I don't know why he's considered "inactive" =.=; but I've been working on this fight...

Also, we got our Internets back :D

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 16 2011, 12:16 PM
so with Felix being inactive, is this still happening?

Cherubas
Artist
175 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 16 2011, 10:24 AM
This should be entertaining. Some day I want to make a scar character, so save a dance for me Graten.

Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 1 2011, 08:09 PM
Oooo sweeeet~

graten
Artist
16 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 1 2011, 08:01 PM
Nah Felix ain't going to be a scar match ONLY person, I just feel like inflicting violence on him : D Cuz I'm a bad parent <3

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 1 2011, 04:20 PM
To hell with pacing, shoot for the stars!

Can't wait to see how this shit turns out, good luck you two.

Krissy
Artist
105 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 1 2011, 03:57 PM
More like taking breaks between battles.

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 1 2011, 03:54 PM
Graten, is this character only going to be in Scar matches? sounds like this will be a blast.

DJ Neko, pacing is something that can be very hard to pick up. a good rule of thumb is dialogue pages have up to 7 panels and action pages have between 3 and 5 panels. allowing panels to overlap can also help move one action into another, or carry a conversation more smoothly.

Krissy
Artist
105 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 1 2011, 02:40 PM
I have no sense of pacing. : )

Comic Details -

 
Type: Scar Match
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Apr 6th, 2011
Votes Cast: 22
Page Views: 1319
Winner: Krissy
 

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