Intro Story / Merrick

Intro Story / Merrick

Intro Story — Merrick

by JAZ


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Mister Kent
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945 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 2 2011, 08:46 PM
I love that last page - I love the character's glam and theatricality. You can tell he's a fae diva, and I can't wait to see more comics with him :)

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 3   Posted: Feb 28 2011, 07:02 AM
BenT: Thanks man, it kills me to write intros because they're so short.

Caravaggio: Thanks. I know the lettering is kinda crappy, I've since bought an actual calligraphy pen, so we'll see how that turns out. Either that or I'll switch back to digital.
Caravaggio: CROTCH BULGES
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Bwahahaha!

Caravaggio
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71 comments
# 2   Posted: Feb 28 2011, 12:52 AM
SIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!!!!!!  I like the layout and he way the panel float into one another.  

One thing I'd recommend is watching the lettering.  This one has a kind of drafters square type thing going on that isn't as easy to read as type that might have more curves to each letter.

Also, when it comes to crotch bulges the maximum number of lines I'd use is 5.  Every time.  Using 6 makes the audience uncomfortable, but that's probably what you were going for, wasn't it?

The Bent One
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564 comments
# 1   Posted: Feb 27 2011, 11:34 AM
This looks like it has some promise. I'm loving the graphic style, and the writing and pacing were well constructed. I got to page 4 quickly and was expecting more even though I knew it was only 4 pages going in. Good job!

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