Cherubas: XD DrasticFantastic informed me that Sherry made a cameo in your comic! Awesome! haha
Now to comment on the comic itself. It's a nice story (I like that last page XD; ), though as some mentioned, the flow is a bit choppy and interrupted by the placement of certain bubbles and panels. Also the bold font...it's not legible. I'd just stick with the other one you used. Be sure to stack your text better as well! Hoagie bubbles are not a good thing! D: Otherwise, keep up the good work!
Boek vs. Crackman
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
Mar 10 2011, 09:01 PM
# 7
Posted:
Mar 8 2011, 08:17 AM
Well done cherubas, nice and clean. I'd work on your organization, especially with the words and bubbles. It all feels a bit overcrowded despite the rather light content of the panels.
But still, some of your nicest stuff there.
I'm gonna go and assume Crackman was too out of it to appear in his comic.
But still, some of your nicest stuff there.
I'm gonna go and assume Crackman was too out of it to appear in his comic.
# 6
Posted:
Feb 9 2011, 09:24 AM
Two characters I want to battle. I hope nothing bad happens to Boek
Good luck guys: remember one page is better than none, and no defaults.
Good luck guys: remember one page is better than none, and no defaults.
# 5
Posted:
Feb 8 2011, 11:35 PM
I prefer singing it to the AXECOP theme.
Make a good showing, you two!
Make a good showing, you two!
# 4
Posted:
Feb 8 2011, 04:01 PM
Boek with a crack attack.... Good times.
# 3
Posted:
Feb 8 2011, 03:50 PM
does anyone else get the urge to sing "crackman" in the vein of the old TV Batman theme?
# 2
Posted:
Feb 8 2011, 03:50 PM
If Boek doesn't get addicted to crack I am going to be very disappointed.
# 1
Posted:
Feb 8 2011, 02:48 PM
Good luck on your first battle, splint. Hope to see all the best from you two!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks + 1
Ended:
Mar 14th, 2011
Votes Cast:
17
Page Views:
1878
Winner:
Cherubas
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