Intro Story / Ponch Pomperelli
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# 5
Posted:
Feb 7 2011, 10:31 AM
Yeah, I certainly shoulda pointed that out or something. Whoops!
# 4
Posted:
Feb 7 2011, 09:11 AM
Agreed, an older character most folks probably won't know.
# 3
Posted:
Feb 7 2011, 05:48 AM
ah that makes more sense. still more indication would've been nice
# 2
Posted:
Feb 7 2011, 04:35 AM
kuro: Hard to really comment on anything here as it was just an exchange between talking heads really. Doesn't really show us what we can expect or build too much excitement really, so please follow this up with something cool.
Also his buddy's get up seemed a bit much for just sitting around clothes.
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Unfortunately, it's not explicitly stated that the 'friend' is Detective Spandex.
Really cool you did this entire thing in a day like you said. Props, hopefully this guy sticks more than Velvet did for you.
# 1
Posted:
Feb 7 2011, 04:01 AM
Hard to really comment on anything here as it was just an exchange between talking heads really. Doesn't really show us what we can expect or build too much excitement really, so please follow this up with something cool.
Also his buddy's get up seemed a bit much for just sitting around clothes.
Also his buddy's get up seemed a bit much for just sitting around clothes.
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these random comics are such a treat, bring back neon green pompadour man please