The Black Cat vs. j.j
Critiques & Comments
# 33
Posted:
Jan 31 2011, 11:33 PM
ttttttttthanks for reading ladies and gents!!!!!!!!!!
# 32
Posted:
Jan 31 2011, 11:13 PM
Kevin Birtcher:1) It was 2002 and 2) I fixed your account. Can't even imagine how that got screwed up.sheldon: HAHAHA, I TRIED VOTING, AND IT TOLD ME I NEED A WEEK TO FAMILIARIZE MYSELF WITH THE SITE. I'VE BEEN HERE SINCE 2004. HAHA AIN'T THAT SOME SHIT.Quote
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Thank you kevinnnnn xoxoxo
# 31
Posted:
Jan 31 2011, 09:37 PM
sheldon: HAHAHA, I TRIED VOTING, AND IT TOLD ME I NEED A WEEK TO FAMILIARIZE MYSELF WITH THE SITE. I'VE BEEN HERE SINCE 2004. HAHA AIN'T THAT SOME SHIT.
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# 30
Posted:
Jan 31 2011, 08:03 PM
HAHAHA, I TRIED VOTING, AND IT TOLD ME I NEED A WEEK TO FAMILIARIZE MYSELF WITH THE SITE. I'VE BEEN HERE SINCE 2004. HAHA AIN'T THAT SOME SHIT.
# 29
Posted:
Jan 31 2011, 07:52 PM
Nobody does comics like my Jho.
# 28
Posted:
Jan 26 2011, 03:38 PM
the scores are neck-&-neck! D:
# 27
Posted:
Jan 26 2011, 01:36 PM
thanks everybody! orange: yeah gotta work on my time management, I stupidly wait last minute to do the last 5. Other than that, my gutter needs work (gotta use RULERS now) thanks for the crit, really appreciate it!
# 26
Posted:
Jan 25 2011, 09:00 PM
Gorgeous on both sides! I shall think of more to say, but I really enjoyed both your works - great sue of black and white, and interesting use of the romantic story angle.
# 25
Posted:
Jan 25 2011, 08:40 PM
RedRevolver: Wow, you both did a really amazing job!!!! I didn't want either to end
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# 24
Posted:
Jan 25 2011, 08:42 AM
Because I already read this, I need to rework my story. Thanks for the ideas.
# 23
Posted:
Jan 25 2011, 02:40 AM
Man both of you guys did a good job, but I personally got to hand this one to Jho.
Reavz, for something that generally isn't my cup of tea, I still thought the art was well done and enjoyable to look at but in some ways I felt that the comic was lacking something overall. It felt empty, the BGs never really made much of a mark to me. The story was more or less what I expected from this character too, which isn't to say that it was terrible, just predictable. I'm not one to talk on that front, my character is also rather straightforward without much substance, but I just feel like this is the same comic though you have made the previous times only less interesting. Please don't take this the wrong way, I'm just being honest and I don't mean any ill will. I still gave you a great score because its still well done, I just don't feel this was up to par with the rest of your stuff is all.
Jho, your comic was pretty good too look at but at times it felt a little clausterphobic at times and the way you did the first two pages was different from the rest. The lines could probably use some tightening up because they were pretty wobbly in areas but overall I really enjoyed this. I liked that sort of commentary about VOID's shift from fight battles to a wider variety and how you incorporated that into the story. I think you were at sort of an advantage a bit here because you have a lot more history to work with and I felt like your story just had more substance. I would just work on making stuff clearer/less cluttered overall and just tighten stuff up.
Great battle anyway you two.
Reavz, for something that generally isn't my cup of tea, I still thought the art was well done and enjoyable to look at but in some ways I felt that the comic was lacking something overall. It felt empty, the BGs never really made much of a mark to me. The story was more or less what I expected from this character too, which isn't to say that it was terrible, just predictable. I'm not one to talk on that front, my character is also rather straightforward without much substance, but I just feel like this is the same comic though you have made the previous times only less interesting. Please don't take this the wrong way, I'm just being honest and I don't mean any ill will. I still gave you a great score because its still well done, I just don't feel this was up to par with the rest of your stuff is all.
Jho, your comic was pretty good too look at but at times it felt a little clausterphobic at times and the way you did the first two pages was different from the rest. The lines could probably use some tightening up because they were pretty wobbly in areas but overall I really enjoyed this. I liked that sort of commentary about VOID's shift from fight battles to a wider variety and how you incorporated that into the story. I think you were at sort of an advantage a bit here because you have a lot more history to work with and I felt like your story just had more substance. I would just work on making stuff clearer/less cluttered overall and just tighten stuff up.
Great battle anyway you two.
# 22
Posted:
Jan 24 2011, 10:34 PM
you win this round reavz, but I'll get you next time! awesome quality, short and sweet and easy to read. thanks for the battle! it made me try to draw again!
# 21
Posted:
Jan 24 2011, 10:11 PM
RedRevolver: Wow, you both did a really amazing job!!!! I didn't want either to end
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^TRUTH
# 20
Posted:
Jan 24 2011, 09:42 PM
Wow, you both did a really amazing job!!!! I didn't want either to end
# 19
Posted:
Jan 24 2011, 06:22 PM
Odd13: Back, and I'm looking forward to this comic.
I hope you gal's put up a good fight.
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What, you don't wanna see Reavz do something good?
I'm real excited to see what you two have here.
# 18
Posted:
Jan 24 2011, 06:15 PM
done dealz
# 17
Posted:
Jan 22 2011, 02:28 AM
no sleep now.
# 16
Posted:
Jan 21 2011, 04:18 PM
Back, and I'm looking forward to this comic.
I hope you gal's put up a good fight.
I hope you gal's put up a good fight.
# 15
Posted:
Jan 17 2011, 07:07 PM
OH SHIT it's coming!!!
# 14
Posted:
Jan 14 2011, 02:19 PM
Dont worry, I extended it! I need more time too
# 13
Posted:
Jan 14 2011, 12:52 PM
wopps since i dont have any extension handy I'll submit whatever I have in 3 days!! hope people will like it.
# 12
Posted:
Jan 12 2011, 07:11 PM
Why do you torment me with the length of your days?
# 11
Posted:
Jan 6 2011, 05:00 PM
GLORIOUS.
# 10
Posted:
Jan 6 2011, 11:23 AM
Dangit I double posted.
# 9
Posted:
Jan 6 2011, 11:23 AM
Pffft, hahaha. What.
# 8
Posted:
Jan 6 2011, 04:26 AM
GOD YES YESYESYESAWESOME I can't wait for this one! Good luck, gaiz!
# 7
Posted:
Jan 6 2011, 01:16 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
# 6
Posted:
Jan 5 2011, 04:56 PM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
# 5
Posted:
Jan 4 2011, 08:17 AM
looking forward to this!
# 4
Posted:
Jan 3 2011, 09:40 PM
I pre-orgasmed at the sight of this
# 3
Posted:
Jan 3 2011, 08:56 PM
this should be an interesting start...
# 2
Posted:
Jan 3 2011, 08:48 PM
Glad you two could hit off so quickly. Can't wait too see the results!
# 1
Posted:
Jan 3 2011, 08:22 PM
Nice! Good luck you two!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks + 1
Ended:
Jan 31st, 2011
Votes Cast:
37
Page Views:
2631
Winner:
jho
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