Penelope and Pillbug vs. Rtv! and Frequency6: BUZZCUT

Penelope and Pillbug vs. Rtv! and Frequency6: BUZZCUT

Penelope and Pillbug vs. Rtv! and Frequency6: BUZZCUT

by Amaloo

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E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 14   Posted: Nov 27 2010, 04:00 PM
Amaloo: That's rough. I hope this break you're taking does you some good. Whenever you're ready to come back, you're always welcome.

Rtv!: Man, you're totally made a fan out of me through this tournament. I am so happy you joined in and I am so amazed at all this shit you've produced so far. I really love this no-text approach to this comic. Even if this entire thing was a matter of you running out of time, your visuals seriously carry the story along.

Your colors are very fresh and this entire production could pass for a 4 week battle, it's that good. The spine cracking page is gorgeous and I like all the detail you put in for the backgrounds and characters. This is a marvelous comic and probably one of the best ones this round.

However, your anatomy has issues. Facial anatomy and body anatomy. A lot of issues can be seen in foreshortening, but you have such a good design and action sense that it kills me to see these issues. I think once this tournament is through, you should practice placement on the face, because these issues are bringing down your MG-work here, man.

I'm seriously rooting for you for this tournament, this is one of the best stories I've seen and I can't wait to see where you're going to take it in the semi-finals and hopefully the finals. Best of luck to you dude, because you've made a great comic.

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 13   Posted: Nov 23 2010, 04:34 PM
Story pretty much explains itself without dialoque. I liked the spine breaking moment :)
I'd suggest to work on your faces - mouth in half-profile especially :P
I'm no expert on colors, so listen to Angie XD

Charlie
Artist
730 comments
# 12   Posted: Nov 23 2010, 03:46 PM
Man, RTV, you are wicked. Kent said pretty much what I was gonna say haha. Good job man

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 11   Posted: Nov 23 2010, 08:03 AM
RTV-I really liked the coloring here but the greens were occasionally distracting like on page 5 bottom panel I want to focus more on the bushes than on the characters. That background on page 9 was also pretty distracting because of over saturation. I feel like most the time you have a pretty good color sense, but you occasionally slip into some really weird beginner mistakes. Like the over saturated bushes/grass as well as that blue in the top of page 8. It's generally best never to touch pure colors when you're coloring unless you're wanting the comic to look very cartoony. I think the avoiding dialogue was actually a nice challenge for you and I would like to see you actually set out to make a silent comic instead of it being just due to lack of time. Since there were times I was unsure of what was going on and know that dialogue probably was meant to explain what was going on like page 1 panel 3 I was confused about what that white stuff was.

drawdan
Artist
312 comments
# 10   Posted: Nov 21 2010, 12:40 PM
Cool color work as usual RTV...we need to tangle soon..in or out of this Tourney..

Sean Patrick Kelly
Artist
117 comments
# 9   Posted: Nov 20 2010, 09:14 PM
There are no complaints coming from me, RTV!. Just a well executed battle from you.

Sofa King
Artist
15 comments
# 8   Posted: Nov 20 2010, 07:07 PM
THAT WAS PURE AWESOME!!!

Mister Kent
Artist
946 comments
# 7   Posted: Nov 20 2010, 06:22 PM
There are some parts of the anatomy that need work, especially on the faces, but you totally wowed me on production value. That layout and color was cinematic. Great job.

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 6   Posted: Nov 19 2010, 07:26 PM
Uploaded.

Had 9 days to work with.

Dialogue was deliberately left out or it would make you think there's a story attached to it. (originally there was one, but i noticed right on time i wasn't gonna make it.)

Thanks for viewing!

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 5   Posted: Nov 19 2010, 07:21 AM
I think it's good for all these really random matchups to be happening, I look forward to seeing what you guys come up with

Njhinesjr
Artist
94 comments
# 4   Posted: Nov 18 2010, 06:04 PM
Ooooh!!! Oooooh!!! Somebody hit the ground.....KICK!!!!!!

alberto311
Artist
350 comments
# 3   Posted: Nov 18 2010, 03:02 PM
I like Buzzcuts new avatar

Darius Corry
Artist
428 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 6 2010, 03:38 PM
YES! Cmon RTV, This is def swerve for you! Bring hell like always.

Amaloo is quite an opponent.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 6 2010, 07:41 AM
Oh man, favorite artists! I can't wait to see what you guys do!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Nov 26th, 2010
Votes Cast: 25
Page Views: 1369
Winner: Rtv! and Rtv!
 

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