Miette and Flintlock vs. Merk and Ashley Longhorn

Miette and Flintlock vs. Merk and Ashley Longhorn

by Qyzex

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Icon for MerkIcon for Ashley Longhorn45.7%
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by endjoi

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Icon for MietteIcon for Flintlock54.3%
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E.W. Schneider
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1070 comments
# 9   Posted: Nov 5 2010, 08:37 PM
Endjoi: Hey, it's cool to see you do stuff again! You've got some pretty blacks going on and I always like solving mazes. Looking at page one, I think you should try getting some white ink! That black background you had going on for Estrella would have looked better if you didn't have to make room for your text. Maybe look at getting some white ink so you could write it out yourself?

I like your little people and the art is very cute. However, I felt that this comic wasn't a real good show of what you could really do. It feels like maybe you didn't have enough time or perhaps you put it off for too long? (I know what that's like!) I hope that next round for you will be a stronger showing, however!

Qyzex: Aw, too bad you didn't finish, man! This comic was starting out really nice. You've got some really nice backgrounds and blacks going on here, the art looks great. I noticed you're grasping speed lines a little better, because the ones you used on page 2 look really good. Even without text, the characters do speak a lot of emotion through your faces and your posing is really tops here.

I think one of the things about your style that bugs me is the way you make motion with those really broad lines for motion. I think it doesn't do you any favors drawing it that way, it just ends up making your people look blocky.

It's really too bad you didn't get to finish this, because I was looking forward to your entry most of all, I think. Maybe this can be picked up at a later date for you, because it's very cool looking.

Fred
Artist
550 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 09:54 AM
endjoi, that was pretty funny, the art wasnt quite refined, but it was original and entertaining.

Qyzex, it looks like it could've been fun...

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 28 2010, 05:30 PM
goddammit, I'm cutting this close again...

Johnny Blaque
Artist
96 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 25 2010, 02:17 AM
Damn Qyz, I just found about this whole shebang, see this exciting matchup and now you done got me alittle sad.  Good luck both of you!

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 24 2010, 03:17 AM
I have found pretty much NO time to work on this. Heavy work load for classes. I'll get something in, though, I promise.

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 15 2010, 05:22 PM
:D :D :D :D

Good luck you two!

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 15 2010, 05:00 PM
oh boy oh boy!

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 15 2010, 11:53 AM
oh man, I dig the match-ups.  This fits perfectly into my plan, mwahahahaahaha!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 14 2010, 09:44 PM
The Men-Haters League vs. The League of Men?

I'm looking forward to this.

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Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Nov 5th, 2010
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