Marcelo Reyes and Duane Foster vs. Danielle and Bat

Marcelo Reyes and Duane Foster vs. Danielle and Bat

Marcelo Reyes and Duane Foster vs. Danielle and Bat

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# 9   Posted: Nov 6 2010, 07:18 AM
Thanks everyone for the comments and votes.

Aribooboo: I'm sorry you couldn't finish the comic. It looks like you had something very interesting going here.

RoflQ: Thanks for the crit. You're right on pretty much all accounts. I'll use what you said to help make Round 2 better.

E.W. Schneider
# 8   Posted: Nov 5 2010, 11:25 PM
Aribooboo: Hey, I'm glad you participated in this. I really like this loose style you're trying here, it reminds me of how Ronin tried to take his work after doing 'realistic' for so long. Despite having little to no dialogue (except at the end), I really liked the visuals provided. The purple was a nice color choice and I really enjoy the first panel of the first page. You've really improved your head to body ratio on that first page also, and you've got tighter anatomy as a whole.

Even though you didn't get as far as you wanted, it was cool to see you try something different for you.

NeoIcarus: Awesome to see you in this, man. It was a pretty fun comic too and you've really improved your action, it's flowing a lot better and you're doing very well with your style. You've got some good blacks here and your anatomy feels a lot better too. I think you could use with some shading on your people though. Maybe in the form of grays or something, because it still feels like there's a lot of negative space still.

I had wondered how you were going to handle Ari's characters in this case. You did pretty well, I felt. Although after a fact, they're really not there for the plot and mostly become a fun little oddity. Not that there's anything wrong with that or I can blame you. Hopefully you can ditch them next round or figure out a way to integrate them and the next opponents better. Also as a side-note, I was slightly confused at first, since I thought that younger girl was Bat's sister.

However, you have next round to make this build up really awesome and I can't wait to see what you cook up.

Community Manager
# 7   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 09:37 AM
I think we fed off the same creative energy in this tournament XD

# 6   Posted: Oct 29 2010, 11:43 PM
I have no excuses, I simply just lost inspiration. I don't know what happened. Tried something new, I think I wanna play with it more.

I still want to make it up to you Neo and I'd love to battle you again. And I'm not just saying that to make you feel better hahah I'll hit you up sometime, yeah? I plan on battling again soon

# 5   Posted: Oct 26 2010, 10:45 AM
I'm excited about this! good luck guys :D

Johnny Blaque
# 4   Posted: Oct 25 2010, 02:19 AM
This will so fucking RAD!

# 3   Posted: Oct 22 2010, 02:23 PM
I almost wanted to join this JUST to battle one of you two! Neo I'm truly looking forward to see how you use Danielle and Bat together.
Your writing is ALWAYS good and you really crack me up.
Ari you keep getting better, and you tell deeper darker more pensive stories.
You're two styles against each other should be pretty interesting.

# 2   Posted: Oct 15 2010, 01:55 AM
I can feel a complex story building right now XD

E.W. Schneider
# 1   Posted: Oct 14 2010, 09:49 PM
Ooo, 2 of my favorite artists going at it! This is going to be a good one too, I know it.

Comic Details -

Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Nov 5th, 2010
Votes Cast: 23
Page Views: 1124
Winner: NeoIcarus and NeoIcarus

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