Lucy and Mortimerr vs. Rtv! and Frequency6: BUZZCUT

Lucy and Mortimerr vs. Rtv! and Frequency6: BUZZCUT

Lucy and Mortimerr vs. Rtv! and Frequency6: BUZZCUT

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orenkie
Artist
31 comments
# 17   Posted: Nov 6 2010, 05:50 PM
AAHH, King shit!

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 16   Posted: Nov 5 2010, 08:55 AM
Again, the real page 16 is this: http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o207/Rtvizzle/Morty15.jpg


Fred - That was highly entertaining. You did something i saved up for 2011. Which is making your characters aware they are not real. I love your personal involvement in this.
The way you killed F6 i was like:"What the hell?? Just like that?" Then one panel later there's you with an evil laughter. Fukking brilliant.
If i could vote myself i'd give you a 10 on creativity for that goddamn snow! Definitely something i must experiment with in the future. Speaking of futures, i'd like to do this again sometime.

And no this is not a cliffhanger cop out and yes i will show what happens to Lucy. ;)
This was fun, thanks for viewing!

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
1441 comments
# 15   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 11:50 PM
RTV, those last few pages is how I felt the first time you were explaining RTV's story to me :D

Slagglle
Artist
61 comments
# 14   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 06:18 PM
Fred, that snow is fucking awesome.

Rtv, your colors are fukken awesome.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 13   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 02:48 PM
LeFred: What a fun comic! I really liked how you handled the story here. That first page/cover illustration is very fun. (But I can't help feeling like I've seen that pose on RTV somewhere else before . . . ) I thought the making your comic into a gif and adding snow as a really neat touch without being too obnoxious. I think that fish eye view building you drew on the first page is kind of weird though.

Your story and limitations on Mortimerr were interesting and it was very cool to see you try your hand at action again. It's too bad he's dead, because he's such a fun character. (At least we have Month of the Dead 2011! Maybe?) I also loved how you had 06 killed in a silly way.

Your anatomy is getting better, but I still think your hands and feet are on the small side by a bit. The way you resolved the story was good. If this is the last time you work with this scenario (Lucy and Mortimerr) or not, I liked what you did with it and I hope to see you doing stuff again soon.


RTV: Wow! 20 pages, you're an animal! I'm completely impressed at the quality you managed to push out for this. You've got a lot of fantastic colors going on here and you've got an equal amount of very pretty (manly) blacks going on. This is some amazing quality and you've got a really interesting story going on too. You really tried on this one and it was way cool to see you included all these characters in a good way.

However, you've got some anatomy and facial anatomy issues still, but these are nothing new. You've gotta work this stuff out a bit, because these problems bring down what's really an mg-class effort here. If you can move beyond these, you'd easily have an A rank. (That's not to say you've not come far and this isn't better than your past stuff.) I'm really glad you were in this tournament and it's great that you participated and I hope to see what you do with this if you go on to the next round.

Fred v2.0.1
Artist
498 comments
# 12   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 11:44 AM
RTV, you really stepped it up in these last two comics, and I hope you continue that way, the art is clearer, the stories better written and flowed well, and they're damn entertaining. I'm sorry my entry isnt at its best, I had a fuckton of stuff to do this week, so I had done everything but the cover in the first week in prevision of that... oh well. I'd wish you good luck for the rest of the tourney, but I have seven days to wish of a miracle ;)

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 11   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 09:15 AM
you didn't send me an email to let me know so I didn't know if Toast had taken care of it or not, just send him an email to fix it again. And as a heads up everyone is able to fix files uploaded wrong just by reuploading the comic in the proper order, that should fix it. That method is a bit easier than emailing pages in and you'll be able to ensure your stuff gets in there fine.

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 10   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 08:21 AM
OOOH SHIT, PAGE 16 IS THE WRONG FILE!  The council did not get my email or just didn't read it. I saw the timestamp in the comics folder, they were all loaded 30 mins before deadline (when they were still unfininished).
Somehow my finished files never overwrote the old ones :/ shame...


FOlks when your done reading or have a good memory..this is what PAGE 16 was supposed to look like: http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o207/Rtvizzle/Morty15.jpg

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 9   Posted: Oct 29 2010, 11:40 PM
Uploaded, had some problems but i mailed them.

This was fun.
Now that the pressure is off and i look back, my comic feels like 3 people were trying to fight over the story and art. lol
 1vs1 is alot easier :/

We should do this again :D

Fred v2.0.1
Artist
498 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 27 2010, 11:12 PM
Had to uploaded by two at a time, seems to have worked. Sent the thumbs. Bought cheese. All is well for what I can tell!

alberto311
Artist
350 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 23 2010, 08:05 PM
Oh serious Luckk guys!!!!

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 16 2010, 07:52 PM
Quick temporary designsheet updated.

Charlie
Artist
730 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 15 2010, 05:23 PM
GOOD LUKK GUYS.

This shall be exciting :). More Mortimerr is always a good thing :D

Fetus Man
Artist
94 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 15 2010, 09:59 AM
Boners!

Fred v2.0.1
Artist
498 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 15 2010, 08:02 AM
ohfukkohfukk! Time to put on my serious pants.
Show 'em hell, RTV!

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 15 2010, 04:38 AM
I'll be updating my design sheet within the day.

Good luck!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 14 2010, 09:43 PM
Watch out Le Fred, don't get fukked!

Good luck to you both!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Nov 5th, 2010
Votes Cast: 23
Page Views: 1324
Winner: Rtv! and Rtv!
 

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