Jane Blonde and Dipuc vs. Black Dog and Barnyard Butchers

Jane Blonde and Dipuc vs. Black Dog and Barnyard Butchers

Jane Blonde and Dipuc vs. Black Dog and Barnyard Butchers

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Mister Kent
Artist
947 comments
# 12   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 10:05 PM
Le Fred: And who doesnt love pillbug? XD
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Nobody, that's who :D

QTR: Lots of potential here, so I can't wait to see the finished product. The first page is really pretty captivating - love the giant head, and Dipuc looks magical. I'm not exactly sure what's going on in Page 5, but the  imagery is intriguing. My two favorite images are the Black Dog/Dipuc split shot on page 6, and the first image on Page 4. That's a lovely idea, really - shame I didn't think of that first! :)

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 11   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 09:51 PM
qtrnevermore: epic fail on my end
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No.

public question: should I submit a BB of this with text? should i find a better way to scan this that doesnt cut off my pages? should i keep trying this comic thing... or just stick with art?
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Yes. Yes. Keep doing comics.

Fred v2.0.1
Artist
498 comments
# 10   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 06:39 PM
qtrnevermore:
public question: should I submit a BB of this with text? should i find a better way to scan this that doesnt cut off my pages? should i keep trying this comic thing... or just stick with art?
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Yes, probably, and defenitly YES.

QtRNevermore
Artist
286 comments
# 9   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 06:26 PM
epic fail on my end.
I enjoyed your comic a bit mister kent, but eager to see the outcome. good luck in the tourney.

public question: should I submit a BB of this with text? should i find a better way to scan this that doesnt cut off my pages? should i keep trying this comic thing... or just stick with art?

smithz
2 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 03:27 PM
mister kent- awesome job, your line work and use of greys were very well done. Cool story.

qtr- Cool art but I didnt know what the heck was going on.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 02:04 PM
MisterKent: Wow! What a great comic! I really loved the direction you took this story beyond simple revival and fighting. The new design for Dipuc is very cool, despite just losing his scars and gaining a robe. Your usage of blacks and grays are seriously pretty and work in your favor.

The perspective on that face on page 2 panel 4 is kind of odd looking. Mostly because of how that hair is handled. I think your backgrounds were alright, but I think they could have been done better. I'm not gasping for them, but they could have been better detailed, I think. I also love how you had everyone Dipuc had killed in this comic (excluding The Flying Brick who he kills later in his BB, points for making a continuity) it really made it all the more interesting. I really liked this comic and win or lose, I want to see more with Dipuc.


QTRNevermore: It's too bad you couldn't get as far as you wanted on this! I think unless you plan on handwriting your text, you shouldn't draw the speech bubbles, since fonts may not always fit in the bubbles you create.  (Which I wonder why you didn't do for this, because you have good handwriting.)

I'm a big fan of this little traditional kick you've been on lately. I think it's gonna be good for you, but you're  also gonna need to start working with the tone and colored created by your paper more as well I think. (I love the brown paper, totally getting ahalfacupatea vibes.)

I kind of get the story that's going on here, your visuals tell a story just as much as your words would so that's good. I think you've done well with the time you had, so good job. I hope to see you battle again soon!

Fred v2.0.1
Artist
498 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 30 2010, 10:38 AM
Mister Kent, great job! the story is really interesting and pretty funny, I greatly loved the last three panel...
It even has more Pillbug than the actual Pillbug fight! And who doesnt love pillbug? XD

QTR, though I cant figure out whatever the hell is going on, it sure LOOKS pretty good, really like the style you were going for here.

QtRNevermore
Artist
286 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 29 2010, 11:34 PM
uploading the no text version. im really sorry guys.
halloween night club work won this battle.

QtRNevermore
Artist
286 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 25 2010, 02:09 AM
busting ass on this between the 5nightofhalloweenohell at work.
i can promise an epic cameo at least. and zombies.

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 15 2010, 02:03 AM
Awesome :D Good luck !!

Mister Kent
Artist
947 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 14 2010, 11:43 PM
Hell to the Yes

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 14 2010, 09:40 PM
Can the God of Hate hate zombies back to the grave?

Will Black Dog put fear into the heart of Jane Blonde?

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Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Nov 5th, 2010
Votes Cast: 30
Page Views: 1344
Winner: Mister Kent and Mister Kent
 

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