This was a really pleasing comic. I was really glad to see how you handled all this back story, it was an interesting set up for what I hope is all addressed and handled for your All-Together Now! entry.

I'm not too big of a fan for how you color things, background colors used for the eyes and all. I think it looks like you ran out of time on it or something, but I know this has to be conscious decision because you do it with all of your entries as of late.However, you might be going somewhere with it, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.

Looking at all this art and how you handled the Speed Death Tournament, I'd like to see you used your blacks a little more. Your stuff feels a lot more dramatic with it, and all the small details you add (such as the cover or page 5's face reveal) increase the quality of your work as a whole.

I don't know if the blood stain on the text on page 12 was conscious, but if it was, I wouldn't do it again, it clutters the speech bubble. You're pretty good with your dialogue, although some spots get a little chunky, so watch how you write it up and say it out loud to yourself to see if you can make it flow better at some spots.

I'm really super excited to see what your tournament entry will bring and I hope to see you make it to the finals just so we can have real resolution to the story you brought to the table with Dipuc.

heheheheh.... interesting.

I hope not to disappoint

Yeah, alright! I've been waiting for this.