Mr.Flque - That was too good, loved what you did here, great humor and even better art. Loved the surreal environments you created outside of the house, and your characters are really endearing. Did you use ink washes for this? Also, i loved the fact that you used a non existent (maybe it's your secret alphabet, i have one too..~) text for this, gave it an even better other worldly feel to it. And jawbone behind the ear, priceless! I wouldnt mind having this comic in print for my bookshelf. By far my favorite comic of the competition. Great job!
Great work evreryone else, shame DJ neko and slaggle didnt get anything up though. Time to vote!
24 Hour Comics / E.W. Schneider vs. Charlie vs. (Pi) vs. Fred vs. Ransom!
Critiques & Comments
# 25
Posted:
Oct 6 2010, 09:23 AM
# 24
Posted:
Oct 4 2010, 12:37 PM
Rofl that has to be the best comic you've posted on void in YEARS! Maybe all your battles should be 24 hour deadlines :3
I'll get around to reading the rest of these later.
I'll get around to reading the rest of these later.
# 23
Posted:
Oct 4 2010, 08:25 AM
Cool stuff everyone.
Le Fred: Yours was probably my favorite. I like how you used panels for entire baloons. That actually didn't look as lazy as it sounds. It kind of loses the point of a comic for a bit though. (which is story told by images)
Rofl: Yours is crazy well rendered. It wasn't 24 pages but is well darn finished for what it is. Cool theme, btw.
Le Fred: Yours was probably my favorite. I like how you used panels for entire baloons. That actually didn't look as lazy as it sounds. It kind of loses the point of a comic for a bit though. (which is story told by images)
Rofl: Yours is crazy well rendered. It wasn't 24 pages but is well darn finished for what it is. Cool theme, btw.
# 22
Posted:
Oct 3 2010, 11:38 PM
LeFred: I had a better idea when I finished it. I think I wanna redo this story at some point though, I like some ideas I ended up coming with later after I was done with it and had a chance to sit and look back. And you deserve some serious applause for making it as far as you did, man.
I'll give "serious critiques" later.
I'll give "serious critiques" later.
# 21
Posted:
Oct 3 2010, 11:36 PM
Haha yeah I was playing too much Halo and so I thought I'd reference the Grunt's Birthday skull
# 20
Posted:
Oct 3 2010, 10:48 PM
Thanks :3
Rofl; that was... odd XD I liked it very much until they started talking, then I was just lost. Very nice looking, though, whimsical and sureal like I like them.
Orange; HeadshotYaaaay! No, lady, it does NOT get old, there is nothing like hearing cheering kids everytime you kill someone, I could do it all day XD
Pi; GASP! What is our hero going to do? Will he really serve this totally trustworthy sounding person? Tune in next time, when... tell me there is a next time, I already like these people D:
I mean, how can you not love old comunist sailors?
Cake; Did you consult with zsaseubrer before this?
That looked like a fun silly battle, shame its so damn messy when the action starts.
Rofl; that was... odd XD I liked it very much until they started talking, then I was just lost. Very nice looking, though, whimsical and sureal like I like them.
Orange; HeadshotYaaaay! No, lady, it does NOT get old, there is nothing like hearing cheering kids everytime you kill someone, I could do it all day XD
Pi; GASP! What is our hero going to do? Will he really serve this totally trustworthy sounding person? Tune in next time, when... tell me there is a next time, I already like these people D:
I mean, how can you not love old comunist sailors?
Cake; Did you consult with zsaseubrer before this?
That looked like a fun silly battle, shame its so damn messy when the action starts.
# 19
Posted:
Oct 3 2010, 10:27 PM
I'll let him know so he can fix it, since I can't
# 18
Posted:
Oct 3 2010, 10:22 PM
I did.
# 17
Posted:
Oct 3 2010, 10:16 PM
Did you send them to Toast?
http://entervoid.com/board/index.php?topic=11434.msg195947#msg195947
If not, do it now.
http://entervoid.com/board/index.php?topic=11434.msg195947#msg195947
If not, do it now.
# 16
Posted:
Oct 3 2010, 10:02 PM
Where are the three last pages of my comic? D:
# 15
Posted:
Oct 3 2010, 01:45 AM
8 pages, uploaded. i've hit my limit.
# 14
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 11:37 PM
You guys are going dddowwwn!
# 13
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 10:28 PM
I had plans with people today, so I'll try and get a couple more pages knocked out here, but at most I'll have about 7 haha.
# 12
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 10:26 PM
Oh. yeah, 20 first pages seem to work, sent the 3 others to toast.
Also, 24 hour comic: totally worth it. A fun day spent with my music and pencils, away from all the growing stress of everyday life. :3
Also, 24 hour comic: totally worth it. A fun day spent with my music and pencils, away from all the growing stress of everyday life. :3
# 11
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 10:23 PM
Goddamn it was time this madness ended XD
my hands are shaking... 23 pages! I just didn't have anything to put for a 24th, my story is complete.
I spent all day on this! who would've thought the 24 hour challenge would be so long? D:
You can go and read http://fred-s-kaed.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2rleab as prior reading. It's not mandatory, but it involves the same characters and universe.
my hands are shaking... 23 pages! I just didn't have anything to put for a 24th, my story is complete.
I spent all day on this! who would've thought the 24 hour challenge would be so long? D:
You can go and read http://fred-s-kaed.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2rleab as prior reading. It's not mandatory, but it involves the same characters and universe.
# 10
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 09:39 PM
But, an addendum that I'm really happy with my 15 pages.
# 9
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 09:37 PM
15 pages.
# 8
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 09:26 PM
Submitted, though mine is mega rough and unintelligible, I probably only ended up spending about 2hrs on it, including sticking the pages together and stuff..got distracted with RL worries ;_; Thank god for sparring matches! Can't wait to see everyone's :]
# 7
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 09:06 AM
Go team!
# 6
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 07:01 AM
Bengay.
# 5
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 07:00 AM
Oh God, my arm is killing me. And I'm only at my 10th page or so.
# 4
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 05:39 AM
What the what? What's the meaning of this?!
# 3
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 02:12 AM
Hell yeahhhhhhh.
# 2
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 01:01 AM
# 1
Posted:
Oct 2 2010, 12:09 AM
PSSST, this one is totally better than the other one! Good luck!
Artist Sparring Match
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1 week
Ended:
Oct 10th, 2010
Votes Cast:
11
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Winner:
E.W. Schneider
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Also, the alphabet was done on the spot, I just took the face of a dice and added a few random lines. And it's funny you mention in print, because I kind of wanna do this story again but better. And thank you, you're too kind.