Mr Awesome vs. Hellgator

Mr Awesome vs. Hellgator

Mr Awesome vs. Hellgator

by Wolcik

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Fearn
Artist
352 comments
# 9   Posted: Oct 9 2010, 02:47 AM
After some nice creative crits from Rofl, have some candies:

ironlion: what ROFL said - whoa action. I like the way you drew Mr Awesome (meaning I like ur style :>) and I liked the PETA thing ;P

Wolcik: I just can't stop totally loving delusions of Mr Awesome. I think you're doing them really really well and I love your ideas! Please never stop!

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 3 2010, 12:15 AM
ironlion: Hey, welcome to the site.  You've got a pretty good action sense going on, although your speed/action lines could use a little work. Having them float in midair like you have it on the first page is sort of weird looking. I also think not showing all of the deer weakens the impact of this page.

The munch munch slurp crunch sound effects are very bland looking. I would try to either write it yourself with some sort of gruesome detail to it or find a better font. There's a lot of free resources you can find, such as blambot.com. Also on that note, I would try avoiding changing fonts throughout the comic (except in the case of sound effects) since spoken word and thought shouldn't change to remain clear.

I like your usage of blacks, although you can push them more I bet. You seem to have a really good anatomy grasp, but isn't too consistent. Try to practice that out. You had a good thing going, although keep watch on not giving enough head space. Your eyes are a little high on Mr. Awesome on the last page, but that's also a foreshortening shot so that can be tough to rectify.

This fight was looking great and it's a shame it cut off at what feels very premature. This was a fun first fight and I hope you stick around on here.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 3 2010, 12:06 AM
Wolcik: I was surprised you didn't do anything with the VCPD subplot for this comic. It'll be kind of weird if you just drop it after 1 battle, but hey, I assume you'll do something to wrap it up.

You've managed to improve on your inks, but they still feel really disjointed and blobby rather than enhancing your forms. I would try looking at more examples of people you like and maybe see how they handle their solid blacks. I think you could have pushed your grays a little more with this fight, since you've given us only 2 tones and used sparingly. In the future, I would try to push these blacks and grays much more.

Your body anatomy is nearly solid, but you have this habit of scrunching your heads. Work a little on giving more head space so your people have brain-room. Your proportions are usually good though, if not elongated sometimes.

Good job though, I hope to see you battling again soon.



ironlion: Hey, welcome to the site.  

Cherubas
Artist
175 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 2 2010, 05:13 PM
I'm sure it will be AWESOME!

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 2 2010, 04:10 PM
Uploaded! I didn't fix the lines properly so my photoshop abilities had problem cleaning scans.
It's short and without much humor, but it's not a default :P

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1060 comments
# 4   Posted: Sep 24 2010, 12:38 PM
Wolcik: Cool! This time I try to make good traditional pages - no digital lines.
Good Luck ironlion!
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Wow, good luck to that then. No rushing, do your best.

And hey, hope you have a really good first battle Ironlion!

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 3   Posted: Sep 20 2010, 06:33 PM
Good luck you guys : D

ironlion82
Artist
12 comments
# 2   Posted: Sep 20 2010, 05:57 PM
So who's going first? LOL!

Wolcik
Artist
492 comments
# 1   Posted: Sep 19 2010, 03:06 AM
Cool! This time I try to make good traditional pages - no digital lines.
Good Luck ironlion!

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Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Oct 9th, 2010
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Page Views: 1030
Winner: Wolcik
 

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