Good stuff Wolcik! I definately think you need to work on your backgrounds a bit more.....

Story wise: Stay tunned, kids XD Blackbird vs Mr.Awesome is coming due two weeks and I bet we both bring something good to the playground. Dunno if I manage to start coloring, but I'm sure gonna try to spend some time to show quality

Art wise, not bad Wolcik. It still tends to be hit and miss from panel to panel, but when you hit it, it's pretty good.

Story wise, eeeeeeh. I really liked Mr. Awesome, but now he's basically going to be a mindless slave type character? I dunno how I feel about that. I'll hold out complete judgment until I see where this goes...

I think you're doing very well with the solid blacks on the characters, it really adds a bit more depth to your work. I'd like to see them brought more into the backgrounds now so we don't have this super clean background against shaded characters. I think it's fine that you introduced some new characters, it helped get me interested in what's going to happen next since I'm still a little clear of what their relationship is with Awesome. I do agree with pyras about the epic chunk of text, I think either just splitting it into 2 bubbles or splitting it into an extra panel would be a good way to break up the text for better flow.

Your art definately looks better this way. I do recommend you look up David Finch.

Pyras that's mean! Hags have feelings too (maybe)

I like the plot developments you've dreamed up, and I can't wait to see the masked women (and the hag) appear in more Mr. Awesome comics.

And the plot thickens.

PyrasTerran: Yeah, I wanted to put some information up there and I didn't know how to compile them better. I gave some of Bob's secrets now so for now I'll focus on him again - don't expect those girls showing up in my battles soon.

Hiemie: Who's?

Ahah! Things are getting real juicy!

Great intrigue, I can't wait to see what happens next; My one gripe is the hag's run-on-like sentences at the bottom of page 5. She of all people should be catching her breath XD

Well, when I get the time, I'm going to have to bust a head or two.