Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 2 / Pico vs. R

Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 2 / Pico vs. R

Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 2 — Pico vs. R

by HeyZoos

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Blinkspeed
Artist
22 comments
# 28   Posted: Aug 22 2010, 05:36 PM
ok, admittedly not as awesome as your last entry, but I'd be lying if I said it wasn't funny as hell! plus your seemed a lot cleaner so that's a plus

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 27   Posted: Aug 22 2010, 09:11 AM
nice work, greg. No real complaints. To me, very dead leaves, this one particular for some reason.

Dingo
Artist
276 comments
# 26   Posted: Aug 22 2010, 08:43 AM
omg greg i loved it! i can't wait to see the next comic you do, all the stuff you do is so lively and fun   :D
i admit i squealed at the radiogreg plug

wish this wasn't a default win though   ;n;

Shojin
Artist
92 comments
# 25   Posted: Aug 19 2010, 10:10 PM
Haha, great job.  I loved the story to bits, can't stop laughing over this. XD

Amaloo
Artist
76 comments
# 24   Posted: Aug 19 2010, 09:07 AM
I cracked up :D

alberto311
Artist
350 comments
# 23   Posted: Aug 17 2010, 09:13 AM
Good Job Hey!!!!

Good story telling i like the use of backgrounds, I'm looking forward to your future battles when you get more time to draw and create.

The main critique is work on your line weight, it's something I'm working on.

beardedMenace
Artist
55 comments
# 22   Posted: Aug 17 2010, 06:48 AM
Damn Zoos, if youda had a few more days to really spiff that up, it might have been straight 10s from me!  What I'm saying is you are good and I am jee-louse.

trickstersGambit
Artist
34 comments
# 21   Posted: Aug 17 2010, 03:15 AM
OH NO. not another default!

Zoos, Very fun. I love the toned lookl, maybe you could have cleaned out the blue line before you uploaded it though? It gives it a kind of messy feel.
Poor Pico. What a crappy day.

HeyZoos
Artist
22 comments
# 20   Posted: Aug 16 2010, 12:35 PM
thanks guys

i'm gonna try that toning advice, maybe keep the backgrounds black and white tone while giving the characters their own flair

i'll give it a shot, thanks!

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 19   Posted: Aug 16 2010, 12:32 PM
AAAUGH! DEFAULTS!

Greg: Awesome comic dude, nice use of pacing and build up, you just need to clean shit up more often, and if you're going to use those red tones, use them a bit more in a comic like this, otherwise it'll look outta place. So far, you're the man to beat in this tournament, keep going dude!

Punk Jax
Artist
40 comments
# 18   Posted: Aug 16 2010, 08:54 AM
okay you would have won anyway woah

I WISH I WAS HOME NORMALLY THIS WEEK SO I COULD GIVE YOU A FAIR BATTLE, I mean your side is awesome so you'd win, but I feel bad for defaulting. :C

As for critique, uh. Just clean up those pencil lines like Angie said. That's really all I have to say, because everything else is eerily perfect. One day I hope to be JUST AS AWESOME AS YOU, BRO.

ShouldaCouldaCola
Artist
48 comments
# 17   Posted: Aug 16 2010, 12:57 AM
Loved it, hilarious timing-- especially the panel about art school. Whether I survive this round or not, I want to fight you one day.

As for crits, dunno...the tones were a really nice touch, I would only suggest that since you gave R a reddish tone, maybe Pico could have been given a yellowish tone. That way, the panels where pico gets stepped on and kicked into the VCPD can be read just a tad more clearly.

Rock on.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 16   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:27 PM
EXCUSES

Ok seriously I'll crit this now to make up for padding your comments with ridiculousness.

I think that the toning really helped give some depth and more clarity to your work, I think you should keep practicing with it. I think you may have to start digitally lettering your pages because while your handwriting gives the text character, I found it hard to read sometimes. The other big thing you should work on is post production work. Make sure that you clean up those pencil lines before you tone, it'll bring your quality up more. I think it was an overall enjoyable comic, just work on those issues for now.

HeyZoos
Artist
22 comments
# 15   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:24 PM
PICO DIDN'T WEAR HIS SCARF BECAUSE IT WAS PROBABLY LIKE 90 DAMN DEGREES

HeyZoos
Artist
22 comments
# 14   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:24 PM
its okay pico's exoskeletal transfer into humanoid or some shit makes him safe I GUESS I HAVE NO IDEA HE IS PROBABLY HURT AND NEEDS MEDICAL ATTENTION

aw Jax sucks you couldnt submit but i know how shit goes, i hope you submit to beyond battle!

thanks for the words guys, i'll try to step up my toning game next round

Charlie
Artist
730 comments
# 13   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:23 PM
BUT THE SCARF COULD BREAK THE PLANE WITH ITS FISTS WOOOOOOORGGGHHH.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 12   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:16 PM
BUT FOR ALL WE KNOW HE COULD HAVE GOTTEN SUCKED INTO A LOW FLYING AIRPLANE BECAUSE OF HIS SCARF! Pico watched The Incredibles before this so he's okay.

Runic
Artist
52 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:16 PM
= | Aw. That's a shame Jax. I was really looking forward to see what you were going to do with R.

But HeyZoos. AW MAN. Pico! OWCH! OOF! >_<!!!
I felt those! Owwwwwwww!! Amazing job!

Charlie
Artist
730 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:14 PM
Pico this is why when you are a scarf wearer of VOID, you keep your scarf on. YOU KNOW HOW MUCH OF THAT COULD HAVE BEEN AVOIDED!?

AWESOME comic though dude, I was cracking up at the end of it. I love your art style, it has a lot of stylistic elements that I tend to be drawn towards anyway. You rock dude.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 10:01 PM
That really sucks! D: Well if that's the case then the comic is going up then

Punk Jax
Artist
40 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 15 2010, 09:58 PM
I am here to disappoint you all by saying I have to end my place in the tournament by default. In Mexico I've had little time to myself and less on a computer. With no scanner access it also means no rushed comic either. I may just extend the story I had laid out in a Beyond Battle to continue R's story when I return to the US.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 14 2010, 10:20 AM
this is gonna be sweeeet

otamie
Artist
23 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 12 2010, 12:47 PM
Can't wait!

JimValid
Artist
43 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 9 2010, 08:46 PM
Hell yes! Good luck you guys!

Punk Jax
Artist
40 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 9 2010, 10:58 AM
By the way, I've no scanner this week and about half of next (voting week). This means an all digital comic from me this time. :X

GREG, YOU'RE GOING TO WIN, BUT I'LL TRY MY ALL AND GIVE MY BEST.

HeyZoos
Artist
22 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 9 2010, 10:34 AM
badical. lookin forward to fightin' ya jax :)

Cherubas
Artist
175 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 9 2010, 08:47 AM
Could be, unless the first round was just to conceal your true power level.

"Vegeta, what does the SCOUTER say about his POWER level?"

Punk Jax
Artist
40 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 9 2010, 07:27 AM
Aw jeez, this one will be hard.

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Aug 22nd, 2010
Votes Cast: 47
Page Views: 1453
Winner: HeyZoos
 

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