Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 1 / R vs. Massimo and Max

Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 1 / R vs. Massimo and Max

Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 1 — R vs. Massimo and Max

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Keres
Artist
15 comments
# 12   Posted: Aug 13 2010, 06:53 PM
Holy crap Punk jax I missed your first battle? D:

Punk Jax
Artist
40 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 3 2010, 08:51 PM
@Roger: Haha, I'm actually pretty disappointed, dude. I expected a better excuse at least, bro. :'D But in all seriousness, the randomness of your comic makes it funny enough to like yours better than my own. :3c I love your linework, I'm just mad you didn't have more. :C

@Everyone who read my poorly made comic: Sorry for the bad quality. My parents' 25th anniversary is coming and there was a rush time to pack everything to bring over to Mexico which just happened to cross over during this comic's drawing time. Thus, this left me only a day for actual drawing. The original rough sketch had more details (though still no shading, I should work on that) but I realized I ran out of time when I literally inked and submitted the comic as our ride to the airport rode up. I really hope Void teaches (read:forces) me to organize my time better.

@Those who critiqued: Thanks! I always love critique. :D

oh, and @Kuro: I love drawing, I'll prove it to you in my next comic, I promise. ;0;

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 2 2010, 11:17 PM
Eh... I guess both of these were OK, but I think that there could of been a bit more effort into these comics? You shouldn't be afraid to push yourself folks, in fact, that's strongly encouraged!

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 2 2010, 02:54 PM
Jax, there's no real backgrounds, or shading for the sparse line work & a lot of panels seemed to crop or zoom not for effect, but only to save you from drawing. I couldn't grasp what happened. And when some thing was happening, you'd draw it super tiny & not give it the space it deserved. Do you not like drawing?

Roger, to me, this kinda comes of as a default. I mean the minimum was three comic pages & you're only giving us one page of comics here. A rather uneventful one with messy lines. Sorry if you didn't get the time, but instead of playing with covers & such, you could have given us more comic to work with.

Roger_mild
Artist
24 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 2 2010, 11:38 AM
On a lighter note and completely random I like how you did the moobs on Massimo and I wish I used Max more. Jax you did great for your first character comic and I wish you good luck.

Roger_mild
Artist
24 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 2 2010, 11:34 AM
Thanks.

Base
Artist
56 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 1 2010, 09:58 PM
This has to be one of the most bizarre fights I've read so far...

Jax: Nice intro into Void. The lack of shading made it a little difficult to tell locations apart, but I could follow the story easily enough... though, to be fair, that was certainly a confusing story. Well done nonetheless!

Roger_mild: Ouch, yeah. Managing time is a bitch. I'll crit what you had, though: Nice lines! The setting was simple and the gag was short, but it was interesting enough to read. I'm confident that with practice and more time you could make a better product for us.

Roger_mild
Artist
24 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 1 2010, 07:35 PM
I uploaded. it's terrible. I need to manage my time better. Sorry, dudezes!

I will do better in any future battles I have, I SWEAR! QYZEX WILL BEAT ME UNTIL I DO IT!

Punk Jax
Artist
40 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 31 2010, 10:44 PM
Submitted.

Rushed comic is better than no comic. I'm leaving to Mexico RIGHT AT THIS MOMENT, BYE.

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 26 2010, 12:56 AM
Welcome back Roger! Just remember to do your best here folks, the minimum is a mere 3 pages too! And yes I am going to say this to everybody.

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 26 2010, 12:31 AM
good luck duders!

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 25 2010, 09:12 PM
Good luck the both of you!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Aug 8th, 2010
Votes Cast: 33
Page Views: 1020
Winner: Punk Jax
 

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