Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 1 / Liam vs. Ms.Clean

Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 1 / Liam vs. Ms.Clean

Invitational Tournament 2010: Round 1 — Liam vs. Ms.Clean

by himura

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Mistress Shade
Artist
53 comments
# 16   Posted: Aug 7 2010, 07:02 AM
Deathly (I'm not using Silent for you because my u.n. is typically Silent Shade): having never seen your work before, I'll say it's nice to see your effort to make fuller compositions including bgs. Largely I agree with Kuro, but in your favour I did think your palette choice was consistent a appropriate. I found it funny to see 'PREGNANT' sort of arbitrarily pasted onto a dumpster. I know it was supposed to be an ad, but you needed to make it an ad. Otherwise I just filled in the blank for myself, "PREGNANT? Then toss your unwanted baby in this dumpster!" While humorous I don't think that's what you were going for.

I didn't think the story was really all that punchy. Like we've seen a werewolf attack before, but how is this one different or interesting.

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 15   Posted: Aug 3 2010, 10:50 AM
Silent, you can draw no doubt, but the work looked sloppy with the tablet. And it was weird that the stylization was never too consistent. It's like if you're using photo ref you're not applying the ref the same way each time, if that makes sense. The layouts were odd at times. Like when you see the werewolf lurking in the alley, the way it sits ominously at the bottom of that first panel doesn't look right because she sees it but it doesn't see her. This doesn't establish it being that threatening to her. Also the Liefeld-esque, knee cap crop of her running makes her look more like an amputee than mid-action.
I think my biggest issue was with the balloons & text. Handlettering's great, but you have to take your time on it. With balloons, there's several tutorials on different ways to do them in the forums. For the text, use a much thinner brush & take your time. While lettering works best when it compliments the art, it's still gotta be legible.

DeathlySilent
Artist
38 comments
# 14   Posted: Aug 2 2010, 09:12 AM
Thank you Le Fred, I will absolutely try to do better with revealing more about who/what my character is like in the next round... and I agree with my expressions lacking... I took pictures for some of them but I don't think they were pushed enough... made the situations hard to believe. >< Thank you...

Fred v2.0.1
Artist
498 comments
# 13   Posted: Aug 2 2010, 08:59 AM
Sad Fred is sad to see a forfeit...
Anyway, Deathly silent, nice coloring, the story didnt say much about the character, unfortunatly. The thing that bugs me the most is the expresions, both in the body and face, that didnt seem to quite carry what it was supposed to.
Good luck in the next round! ;)

DeathlySilent
Artist
38 comments
# 12   Posted: Aug 1 2010, 10:30 PM
I learned a lot from my first comic... I learned about things I didn't know I could do and further realized the things that I could not and need to work on. Overall was a good experience and will focus more on story and time management. I'm very excited to see what Himura came up with!!!! :)

DeathlySilent
Artist
38 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 1 2010, 04:48 PM
Uploaded.

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 10   Posted: Jul 26 2010, 12:37 PM
Cool. Do good you two. and have fun!

Cherubas
Artist
175 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 26 2010, 09:27 AM
Nice, Hiemie. Nice.

Hiemie
Artist
511 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 26 2010, 08:54 AM
I want a good clean fight.

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 26 2010, 12:54 AM
Welcome to void you two, just remember to do your best, the minimum is a mere 3 pages too! And yes I am going to say this to everybody.

Enaxon
Artist
27 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 25 2010, 09:39 PM
WEREWOLVES DONT TAKE NO CLEANING NONSENSE

No but seriously. Best wishes and I hope you two push out quality comics!

himura
Artist
3 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 25 2010, 09:38 PM
Good luck to both of us, DeathlySilent! I'm nervous too, but I'm sure this will be a lot of fun. :D

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 25 2010, 09:22 PM
Nothing to be nervous about :D At least this isn't a death tourney so you guys can still play around plenty on Void

DeathlySilent
Artist
38 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 25 2010, 09:20 PM
Man both excited and nervous! ><

Dimension
Artist
489 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 25 2010, 09:17 PM
Do your best you two! I'm excited about this. :3

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 25 2010, 09:13 PM
Hope to see from good work from you two!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Aug 8th, 2010
Votes Cast: 33
Page Views: 1031
Winner: DeathlySilent
 

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