Dr. Pye vs. Mortido

Dr. Pye vs. Mortido

by (Pi)

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Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 20   Posted: Jun 10 2010, 09:49 AM
pi, it was very clear & deliberate. Nice work pushing angles too! I was with you until the Chicago photo... GAH!! DRAW. But seriously, I wanna see what you're coming with next.
jong, tight washes & line work, man. but with taking a minimalist approach, it felt like pi did more with his story. But given the turn around, it's still really nice work. If I could make a suggestion. Some of the darker bits had more hue than others. like there were bits that were tanner than the greys around them. It might be a good idea to "colorize" it or tone down the saturation or something in order to make it all look more uniform.

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 19   Posted: Jun 8 2010, 01:20 PM
PI, i enjoyed your moody colors. That first page set a nice, somber tone. I'd have liked to see more - I'll be keeping an eye one you!
JONG, I enjoyed your shading, and the different tones you made good use of. I agree with Colin - very sharp inks indeed!

rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 18   Posted: Jun 8 2010, 10:06 AM
Pi, your comic really worked for me.  I'm not sure how else to put it.  There wasn't much of it, but the atmosphere was spot-on.  It's a very well-done and appropriate finishing touch to the Doctor's career.  

Mortido, your art was better by a lot, but the whole package was less moving overall.  It was still a pretty good comic, though.  

Wow.  This has been the wishy-washiest critique I have ever given, and that's saying something.  Sorry, guys.  

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 17   Posted: Jun 6 2010, 08:32 AM
Glad to hear that was the reasoning Pi and you not leaving Void!

PyrasTerran
Artist
1512 comments
# 16   Posted: Jun 5 2010, 01:54 PM
Oh poop, Arena never got a chance to meet Pye :(

Mortido! *puts on the hit list*

(Pi)
Artist
475 comments
# 15   Posted: Jun 5 2010, 11:32 AM
Okay, I think I owe people an explanation. This was meant to be Pye's last battle, so it is a farewell. This isn't that I'm done with Void or I'm leaving or whatever, but lately I've been feeling like I've gone as far as I can with the doctor. I'd like to try newer things and different characters, but it's been too easy to fall back on using Pye. In this way, I'm forcing a new beginning on myself, where I won't have the crutch of this old character. I'll be making a new character soon, something I've been trying to do for a while now.

The end of Pye isn't the end of Pi!

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 14   Posted: Jun 5 2010, 09:17 AM
Pi-I liked this but to me it kind of came across as you were saying "I don't think I'll win so the doctor's gonna leave/die no matter what" which was kind of depressing. I enjoyed the comic but that's just how it came across to me. If your intent is to no longer battle on Void then that at the very least was kind of a proper farewell for the doctor.

Jong-I wish you'd finished, the finished parts were very nice. Your comic kind of reinforced what I felt from Pi's, not that you were saying you wouldn't win, but that Pi was wanting the character to die. If you guys didn't plan it that way then it still synched up well regardless. I think the only thing that bothered me about your's is sometimes I had a hard time telling things apart like the 4th panel of page 2 it took me a moment to figure out what was what on Harry.

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 13   Posted: Jun 5 2010, 08:00 AM
Very excellent. Pi did nice with a farewell comic, and some simple colors, and Jong did excellent with some very VERY sharp ink work.

I liked this!

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 12   Posted: Jun 5 2010, 07:53 AM
RoflQu: come on come on come on go up already
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I had to sleep.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 11   Posted: Jun 5 2010, 07:35 AM
come on come on come on go up already

alberto311
Artist
374 comments
# 10   Posted: Jun 2 2010, 12:15 PM
all these death matches, spring cleaning?

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 9   Posted: May 31 2010, 05:42 PM
WHA-? Just noticed this was a deathmatch!
I love both of these characters, WHO DO I CHEER FOR?? D8

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 8   Posted: May 30 2010, 08:43 AM
BALDIES BATTLE

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 7   Posted: May 29 2010, 03:15 PM
Oh look.  A death match.

Corny
Artist
217 comments
# 6   Posted: May 29 2010, 03:06 PM
Say whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat

Darius Corry
Artist
443 comments
# 5   Posted: May 28 2010, 07:17 PM
Someone doesn't like us anymore.

DrasticFantastic
Artist
165 comments
# 4   Posted: May 28 2010, 06:48 PM
Who among these brave warriors will join Gary Colman.

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 3   Posted: May 28 2010, 04:46 PM
HEHEHEAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHA !

ThreeFatesAngel
Artist
26 comments
# 2   Posted: May 28 2010, 03:38 PM
I demand tons of zombies and bones and guuuts!!!  Make it awesome~ <3

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 1   Posted: May 28 2010, 12:40 PM
Oh my God, it's madness everywhere! People are dropping like flies!

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