Lau the Assassin vs. Wynn

Lau the Assassin vs. Wynn

Lau the Assassin vs. Wynn

by carlito

Icon for Lau the Assassin49.1%
993 points
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by JAZ

Icon for Wynn50.9%
1030 points
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JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 25   Posted: Mar 16 2010, 06:32 AM
JoshuaEliGilley: Make a comic about your friends and city maybe and submit that next round? (just sneak the characters into the bg :)
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Hmm... Now that could be interesting... We'll see.

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 24   Posted: Mar 15 2010, 06:24 PM
Fine fight indeed.

Carlito you brought it dude, this was a real strong effort for you and it paid off quite well. I hope you continue to push yourself and level up. The henchmen cameo was dope!

JAZ, I'll quit nagging you about the softies, haha! I really enjoy your inks and color palettes. Hopefully you get some extra extra time next week cause your comics is good, but fuck it dude, live life. Make a comic about your friends and city maybe and submit that next round?  (just sneak the characters into the bg :)

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 23   Posted: Mar 15 2010, 12:31 PM
Don’t be mad at me, I love you guys!

Maybe if I explain myself, you’ll understand.
I’ve been living in a city for the past 2 ½ months.
I’ll be leaving the city in 2 weeks.
I don’t want to use what little free time I have next week, making comics.
I can make comics any time.
I may never be back to this city.
Yeah I know, I should have thought of this ahead of time, but I honestly didn’t think I’d get so attached to this place, or the people I’ve met here.
Either way, it doesn’t matter I suppose.
Just don’t expect much/anything from me in the next round.

Alsoooo, if people are still interested in the storyline, I can finish it in BB form or in the month of the dead. Heh, It’ll be much prettier that way anyway. =)

William_Duel
Community Manager
930 comments
# 22   Posted: Mar 15 2010, 11:22 AM
grrl power.

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 21   Posted: Mar 15 2010, 10:55 AM
Thanks for reading.

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 20   Posted: Mar 14 2010, 05:52 PM
Would it be possible for me to bow out and let Carlito take my place in the next round, if I win?

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 19   Posted: Mar 10 2010, 08:21 PM
Thanks for reading.

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 18   Posted: Mar 10 2010, 01:55 PM
Thanks Qyzex, I'm glad you still dug the story. If I survive this, I'll totally give it my all with my art next round (seeing as it'll probably be my last comic anyway hahaha).

amazingdavid: Jaz - Always a treat...hmmm...rage creating black armed demons....novel idea!
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Whoops! I totally forgot that his transformation is kind of random without those last few pages... Guess I should get on that.

amazingdavid
Artist
441 comments
# 17   Posted: Mar 10 2010, 09:53 AM
Jaz - Always a treat...hmmm...rage creating black armed demons....novel idea!

Carlito - I'd say you had me for the first 5 or so pages then your quality severely dropped.  I'd say if you had kept up the intensity of writing and drawing of those pages you woulda had this one.  Even so you BnW is getting stronger.


this was a good match up you two

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 16   Posted: Mar 10 2010, 12:11 AM
Still loving it, Jaz. Seriously, best story going on in the SDT as far as I'm concerned!

And Carlito! This was the best from you yet! I really dug this comic! Pacing got a little quick toward the end, but other than that, solid

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 15   Posted: Mar 9 2010, 08:55 AM
Carlito Quinones: Sorry this not as epic as I intended.
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That was pretty fucking epic, dude.

Phil: Yeah. My quality is really suffered this week I know. It was more about having no time to do shit, than the effects of the torney. If I survive this, I should have more time next week, but this week was bloody nuts.

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 14   Posted: Mar 9 2010, 08:24 AM
Another close vote for me


Carlito: OK, this story is one of your best I believe. I loved the idea of Lau switching identities with Wynn. I just wished that the action was a bit more clear, it was mostly bust shots of the characters, and that's not really much to look at. You should consider working a bit on perspectives a bit more, don't be afraid to show more of the scenery in your comics, get some establishing shots in there and zoom out a bit more, with a solid foundation of those basics you can become a real force to be reckoned with! Nice story and I liked the twist at the end.



Jaz: I think that the effects of this tourney are starting to show on this round as those last couple of pages are suffering. Not your strongest entry really, but your story is still just as strong and your character development for both Wynn and Lau are nicely done, the ending could of used some work, like maybe have Wynn holding back that power or showing more backstory with the parents. Overall it was pretty solid, you got my vote in quality here.


Both good, time to rest up for the next round though!

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 13   Posted: Mar 9 2010, 12:50 AM
Thanks for reading.

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 8 2010, 09:55 PM
Uploaded.
Drawn all in the last two days, so sorry if it doesn’t look as pretty as usual.
Also, I had to cut a few pages at the end that don’t contain Lau. I might upload as a BB later this week, when I get them finished.

Also, also, I used the soft brushes again, I’m sorry about that too. =)

William_Duel
Community Manager
930 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 4 2010, 04:00 PM
Qyz will never be able to recover if you guys don't deliver.  This is his last chance at happiness.  ;.;

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 10   Posted: Mar 4 2010, 02:41 PM
please do good. I want to read some good comics. :3

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 4 2010, 01:24 PM
You better turn something in man, we don't need another double default!
Seriously man, I haven't even started yet.

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 4 2010, 08:47 AM
Thanks for reading.

AJ 武士龍
Artist
66 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 3 2010, 04:52 PM
Hey i'm Big fan of these two characters here!
Good luck to both!

amazingdavid
Artist
441 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 2 2010, 11:48 PM
oooooh man...HIYAAAAH!!

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 2 2010, 10:22 AM
haha too slow at typing I guess. Josh man, you shoulda won! I feel bad even being here because of a mess up with your internet or whatever.

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 2 2010, 10:18 AM
Thanks for reading.

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 2 2010, 10:15 AM
JAZ it's a mask I asked last time :)

Kick some ass guys! Good luck Carlito!

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 2 2010, 09:37 AM
Thanks Angie.
Good luck to you Carlito, can't wait to see what you do.
Also, quick question about Lau: Is his face all tattooed, or is it a mask?

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 2 2010, 08:48 AM
good luck guys!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Mar 15th, 2010
Votes Cast: 42
Page Views: 1450
Winner: JAZ
 

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