Garic, Always lovin comics from you man but I have to agree, that I didn't get enough of a story arch here. Hope you stick around post-tourney and keep kicking ass.

Red, AAAAAAHHHHHH  awesome! so cool to see mac in your style it was sweet. Overall the art is rocking and fun to look at, you're keeping up a good level I think, the colors on no face girl were badass. You also found a way to make the bitchy cheerleader bit remain entertaining through the use of flashbacks and character portrayals. I concur, your extra effort in the portrayal of ass cheeks is superb.

BOOTY BUTT CHEEKS BOOTY BUTT CHEEKS  BIG BIG BOOTY BUTT CHEEKS BOOTY BUTT CHEEKS

RR: Dayum shawty dats wuz a good comix....Yeah anyway colors plus zipitone nice! I do think your action needs work it's a bit stiff..

Garic: I just wanted something to happen...this was like a huge build up to no punchline...The lines were nice those I am a fan of this style...hope to see more of it...

slight nod to RR for big ol' asses

@Coatl hahaha the crayon drawings are a thing I do. I thought it fit with Moa's delusional memory.

@Phill I'm tryin! I'm a total action n00b, it's way harder than I thought.

@Garic Moa's dialogue seriously made me laugh dude. IT'S SO HARD

Nice!


Garic: Dude, your stuff is still kick ass, but... did you finish this comic? I would of liked to see your take on Moa's death to be honest, but without that, I can't really call this a complete comic. Sorry.


Redrevolver: Pick up some Manga comics or anything from DC or Marvel, because you need to get some knowledge of fight scenes down gurl! Aside from that I'm still loving Moa's bitchy personality, especially her depiction of Noface Girl in page 12. You just need to push your angles a bit more, zoom out a bit more often and brush up on some action scenes from comics like Hajime no Ippo and you'll be golden.



Vote goes to Redrevolver!

yo red when I got to page 12 I was like wtf? lol

uploadeddd!!

Good luck bros!

david thank you for that lovely image.

ugh guys this is not a good week for me but I'll be damned if I don't give 110% anyways.  red, please feel free to bastardize my character as much as possible.

is it me or does the hole where No Face girls face used to be look like a swollen pig anus that you just wanna shove stuff in?  hmm..anyone...?

oh gosh, I guess I'll have to draw a naked lady.

I just jizzed in my pants at work.
THANKS GUYS

good luck guys!

This should be HOT.

I bet there's a porn joke here...

Pffft...wow...really?

yay I was hope hope hoping for this match up to happen