OS-1 vs. Tycho O'Shannessy

OS-1 vs. Tycho O'Shannessy

OS-1 vs. Tycho O'Shannessy

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The One Dark Knight
Artist
128 comments
# 25   Posted: Feb 13 2010, 04:54 PM
Thanks for producing a pretty rocking comic Mrnoitall, love to fight you again in the FUTURE <3

Darius Corry
Artist
427 comments
# 24   Posted: Feb 11 2010, 06:57 AM
...yeah OS's dead.

good run, I guess (first round cut sucks!).

Glad to have run and was a pleasure ODK.

JAZ
Artist
114 comments
# 23   Posted: Feb 9 2010, 04:18 PM
Mrno- Cool action scenes and I liked your watercolours. The only thing that really bothered me about the art was the giant lettering and word bubbles when the aliens were talking. I found them distracting and it kind of took me out of the story a bit. Still, it was an interesting comic. Good job.

Knight- When I first saw Tycho, I honestly thought I wouldn't like him. Thank you for shattering that first impression. Seriously man, this was probably my favourite comic for this round. I loved the story and the art style. The only thing I can really complain about is the lines got a little confusing to me on page 5. Like on panel 4, it's difficult to separate figures. Other than that, awesome job, keep it up man.

Darius Corry
Artist
427 comments
# 22   Posted: Feb 9 2010, 09:53 AM
Yeah this was my first time with the hand lettering thing,so I did what I could with it. I know I need to sharped on the bubbles and such. I'm always so big on making sure I execute my opponents character to their approval...just out of respect.

And ODK's OS was pretty sexy and chiseled despite being short lived (pun intended).

Monday
Artist
934 comments
# 21   Posted: Feb 9 2010, 09:07 AM
Damn I dont know who to vote for.

Mrno- Action stood out for me because your use of reference. And Tycho's characterization was pretty much given the star treatment to the point where I didn't know who's comic I was reading ! As everyone says- blacks seems to be the answer to your clean greys so that extra layer of grit would come out nicely. At times I have trouble with your huge text.  Win or Lose- this was awesome stuff.

Knight- Holy shit those lines are awesooome- but sometimes it gets a bit messy. Compared against Mrno this becomes an issue but nevertheless Tycho is characterized well, and the alien under the helmet bit becomes bat shit amazing to look at. The action overall is crazy and at this point it becomes an issue of preference on who got the ball on that one.  

Writing scored big on both sides too so good job !

William_Duel
Community Manager
929 comments
# 20   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 06:20 PM
Haha yeah Mrno, I wasnt sure what to expect from the first page but this was good.  Yeah you drew and treated Tycho with love until I wasn't sure who was gonna come out on top in this.  This was an excellent story ultimately though I suppose there are a lot of questions left to ask about OS-1.  I too would like to see more black in your work, perhaps around the border, or in the shadows.   Because there is some black there, it just pops out now and again.

You magnificent bastard.  You dastardly asian schoolgirl you.  I've been a fan of your shit since sentai (since I popped in around then anyways) but man the dialogue and story here takes the cake.  Aside from your insane detailings that we've come to expect, this was a lot of fun.  

(also, make me your disciple.....)

sixtem
Artist
395 comments
# 19   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 04:43 PM
Mrno - The story was a bit drab, but you characterized Tycho so well that I really ended up liking this. Your work is very clean and smooth, and I could easily understand what was going on. You may want to make your blacks darker, but I'm not sure how to do that without ruining the clean grays you have going on. Good work!

Knight - Goddamn. Fantastic writing- you got a lot out in those few pages. Also, the gritty cyberpunk was palpable. Despite the cluster of lines, I was able to discern things easily. Not really much to say, keep up the good work.

Darius Corry
Artist
427 comments
# 18   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 04:33 PM
Yeah thanks, I was goin for the complex yet akward dialogue.

and ODK, I'm glad you didn't finish, then I'd really sink into a shadow.

amazingdavid
Artist
441 comments
# 17   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 04:20 PM
Jesus Mary and Joseph ODK you blew me outta the water..very excellent excellently written....the linework was scratchy and rushed but meh it's a week I feel like it got a little too illegible towards the end however....

MrNo- I couldn't even tell this was your work...all the Corry stories pale in comparison very solid..good flow of action there was some weird syntax errors...or maybe not errors just weird sentences like " We have implemented the vitality of your existence"  or "You are the product of a theory that was not only labeled a myth but blasphemy"  ...maybe you were going for like Aliens messing up english or trying to sound smart...but it just comes off kinda clunky and odd.

anywho solid comics for both of you guys...good luck

The One Dark Knight
Artist
128 comments
# 16   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 03:47 PM
Mrnoitall - You put out a really solid comic, I am actually feeling really bad about not finishing my side more D:

Darius Corry
Artist
427 comments
# 15   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 03:24 PM
ugh, OS is eatin it!
Rightfully so,Dark Knight made simple look so good.
I can't me mad...but i also cant stop crying inside.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 14   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 11:26 AM
Mrnoitaul-this was a step up for you, you're getting a lot more confident with your water colors and it definitely shows here. Just get a little more contrast in some areas like the second panel of page 5 and you'll be good to go toning wise. Panels like that everything kind of blends together since it's all the same overall tone. The Nowhere Boy cameo kind of came out of nowhere, when I read the comic I was like um what just happened? Maybe just 1 more panel to establish where he was in the room would have helped me better take it in.

TODK-very happy to see a finished comic from you! I think just a little more work on tightening up some of your backgrounds and cleaning up your pencils lines and you'll be golden. I really enjoyed the character interaction here, the relationship between Tycho and Skidmark was very entertaining.

carlito
Artist
375 comments
# 13   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 11:07 AM
This battle was sweet! I really liked both sides, and man Corry, that was the best thing I've ever seen from you BY FAR.
Sin that was unbelievable, and I hope you can keep it up, cause Your were my favorite to win the last 2 Death tournaments you were in before you just couldn't finish.
I went with Dark Knight, but you both did a really good job.  

The One Dark Knight
Artist
128 comments
# 12   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 10:52 PM
Uploaded.

I mashed designs in this comic. Would have loved to have properly cleaned + colored this. Regretful that Knomer's Skidmark features more in this comic than my opponent, lol, but hopefully OS-1's appearance is suitably badass.

Cheers

Darius Corry
Artist
427 comments
# 11   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 10:11 PM
I tip my hat to everyone that hand letters.
ugh

The One Dark Knight
Artist
128 comments
# 10   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 03:35 PM
my hands are like horrid withered claws

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 9   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 11:33 AM
Reminder for all of you uploading tonight, please read this in the event your upload fails before coming to the mods
http://entervoid.com/board/index.php?topic=10641.0

Coldstream
Artist
159 comments
# 8   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 05:54 AM
see Mrnoitaull!! Octopus butthole!!

Fox24
Artist
215 comments
# 7   Posted: Feb 5 2010, 09:54 PM
son I randomly clicked here and found out you changed your pic. Is it an eye? or his mouth?

Darius Corry
Artist
427 comments
# 6   Posted: Feb 5 2010, 02:25 PM
Everything is an orifice with you,HBH.

Coldstream
Artist
159 comments
# 5   Posted: Feb 5 2010, 11:44 AM
What's up with the new avatar Mrnoitaull?? Looks like some sorta' orifice!!

Darius Corry
Artist
427 comments
# 4   Posted: Feb 1 2010, 06:12 AM
Yo, Kid Atom was sentai favorite.

Best of skill,dude. I'm honored.

Fox24
Artist
215 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 31 2010, 09:37 PM
kill kill kill kill kill

Coldstream
Artist
159 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 31 2010, 06:14 PM
Long live Draxx!!!!!!!

The One Dark Knight
Artist
128 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 31 2010, 05:54 PM
DEATH

Comic Details -

 
Type: Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Feb 14th, 2010
Votes Cast: 52
Page Views: 1536
Winner: The One Dark Knight
 

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