i can't give these away, on account that i work for the company... and more importantly he's my friend ya know?
itd be like me giving away digital copies of yer artwork so people can print them ya dig?
Gabo SanLucas vs. Ziggy
Critiques & Comments
# 17
Posted:
Feb 12 2010, 07:02 PM
# 16
Posted:
Feb 12 2010, 10:38 AM
How bout you just give me the font and I'll give you a font. lol
# 15
Posted:
Feb 10 2010, 04:59 PM
Gabbo, man, I liked the pacing and composition of this comic a lot. The art wasn't the best from you, but hell, it's obvious why, and I have no qualms with it. It was a great read.
Sean, that was insane. I kinda liked it, but that coloring was sloppy. There's a lot of small little problems with the art, but what I can tell is damn, there definitely is some potential there. Good job finishing, too!
Sean, that was insane. I kinda liked it, but that coloring was sloppy. There's a lot of small little problems with the art, but what I can tell is damn, there definitely is some potential there. Good job finishing, too!
# 14
Posted:
Feb 9 2010, 06:18 PM
mel -- thank you hun, love you lots
the font is tim sale something or other?
its a pro font i picked up from http://comicraft.com/
its worth paying honestly -- stands out
the font is tim sale something or other?
its a pro font i picked up from http://comicraft.com/
its worth paying honestly -- stands out
# 13
Posted:
Feb 9 2010, 03:02 PM
Gabe, I think your story had to be the best paced so far. You have school and still managed to pull that shit off with some color. I really hope I get to see more of you around here again. It's a blast to the past and it makes me feel warm in all the right places. What Font were you using, yo?
Sean, a bit rushed. I couldn't quite tell what was going on. That and comic sans. COMIC SAAANS! Your expressions are pretty hot though.
Sean, a bit rushed. I couldn't quite tell what was going on. That and comic sans. COMIC SAAANS! Your expressions are pretty hot though.
# 12
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 04:30 PM
Galvo - Rushed, yes, but the writing was good enough that it didn't really detract from it for me. I could still tell what was going on, too. Good pacing, I felt like you got a lot out in a few pages. And the dialogue was great.
Sean - Pretty trippy style. I had a big problem following your panel layout. Sometimes it was just against where the eyes wanted to flow next, and sometimes, like the upper-right of page 2 and the entirety of page 7, it was just haphazard. Your figures seem kind of stiff, which makes action look awkward. Not sure if this make sense, but it looks like the characters only have the movement range of an action figure sometimes. I do like that whatever you draw you definitely make your own.
Sean - Pretty trippy style. I had a big problem following your panel layout. Sometimes it was just against where the eyes wanted to flow next, and sometimes, like the upper-right of page 2 and the entirety of page 7, it was just haphazard. Your figures seem kind of stiff, which makes action look awkward. Not sure if this make sense, but it looks like the characters only have the movement range of an action figure sometimes. I do like that whatever you draw you definitely make your own.
# 11
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 03:12 PM
sean -- you've done some good work here amigo, i'm happy to see you finally getting into the mix of battle.
elio/angie/vander -- you guys know i'm fully capable of doing better -- so yes, this entry was the personification of "rushed". My apologies go out to sean for turning in a half assed battle.
elio/angie/vander -- you guys know i'm fully capable of doing better -- so yes, this entry was the personification of "rushed". My apologies go out to sean for turning in a half assed battle.
# 10
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 02:05 PM
Galvo: Son of a buiscuit, man, that there was a tasty comic. Cute little story, for sure-- nice flow of action.
The lineart needs some tightening up. I'm seeing lines trailing off through other lines, and I know it wouldn't take too long to clean that stuff up.
Cute, soft colors, though. Very painterly.
Sean: Your comic certainly didn't dick around, and I respect that. T'aint nothing wrong with going strait for the action. The goofy expressions were probably my favorite part of your work.
I'm going to echo everyone else on this'un, but your colors were distracting. The placement was good, but the streakiness was not. You may want to invest in a blender, and a little more patience.
Great battle, folks.
The lineart needs some tightening up. I'm seeing lines trailing off through other lines, and I know it wouldn't take too long to clean that stuff up.
Cute, soft colors, though. Very painterly.
Sean: Your comic certainly didn't dick around, and I respect that. T'aint nothing wrong with going strait for the action. The goofy expressions were probably my favorite part of your work.
I'm going to echo everyone else on this'un, but your colors were distracting. The placement was good, but the streakiness was not. You may want to invest in a blender, and a little more patience.
Great battle, folks.
# 9
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 11:15 AM
Galvo-I enjoyed the casual nature of the comic and the character dialogue was very believable. I do agree with Elio about having some more contrast in your colors, right now I'm looking this over while it's light outside and most of the second page gets totally lost on me since there's like no brights at all. I think overall your coloring would have just benefited a lot from having some actual lights. I wish you'd tightened up your lineart just a little more, since there's areas like page 5 where it crosses into the realm of being rushed/sloppy.
Psycho Sean-glad to see you finally have a battle! I really enjoyed your expressive and exaggerated characters, you did a nice job with them. But I'm thinking this may have worked better in black and white since the streaky markers really hurt the presentation. I don't think you need to digital color or anything, but just getting more consistent with the markers and avoiding that rushed streaky look would have helped a lot.
Psycho Sean-glad to see you finally have a battle! I really enjoyed your expressive and exaggerated characters, you did a nice job with them. But I'm thinking this may have worked better in black and white since the streaky markers really hurt the presentation. I don't think you need to digital color or anything, but just getting more consistent with the markers and avoiding that rushed streaky look would have helped a lot.
# 8
Posted:
Feb 8 2010, 07:33 AM
Gabe, I loved this. Fun, quick, set up for the story. I could of done without the out of place ADULT LANGUAGE. And maybe some CONTRAST with the colors! I'm rooting for SanLucas, and can't wait to see how our reluctant friend manages to take on some higher level fighters. I love the 'looking at the shoe bit' !!
Sean - Not bad man. You're a rookie right? You got some chops! It seems like you lost concentration half way there. You have some solid figure work, but the fight scenes needed to be a little more clearer. Keep drawing, keep in mind of backgrounds, pacing, and flow. Draw draw draw! Don't give up!!
Sean - Not bad man. You're a rookie right? You got some chops! It seems like you lost concentration half way there. You have some solid figure work, but the fight scenes needed to be a little more clearer. Keep drawing, keep in mind of backgrounds, pacing, and flow. Draw draw draw! Don't give up!!
# 7
Posted:
Feb 7 2010, 11:22 PM
Alright, uploaded. It's not done, but it's better then nothing. Sorry to you Glavo for not bringing you a better fight. But at least I didn't default!!!
# 6
Posted:
Feb 7 2010, 11:31 AM
Reminder for all of you uploading tonight, please read this in the event your upload fails before coming to the mods
http://entervoid.com/board/index.php?topic=10641.0
http://entervoid.com/board/index.php?topic=10641.0
# 5
Posted:
Feb 2 2010, 12:09 PM
YAY! GO Gabe! I love yoooou! Show them who is the daddy here!!!
# 4
Posted:
Feb 1 2010, 06:28 AM
Then may the man who loses, loses with dignity and the winner Roar with victory!!!
honor to be fighting you first!
honor to be fighting you first!
# 3
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 09:06 PM
sean amigo -- pull yer pants up, i'm not taking it easy on any of these kids--- including new comers
# 2
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 05:34 PM
Or a ultimate challege of one's own mentality. seriously if I can beat Galvo i'll be happy even I lose the second round. Galvo I promise you, I may be a rookie But that won't stop me from giving you a worthy fight. I won't back down!!!
# 1
Posted:
Jan 31 2010, 05:21 PM
Wait what?? Galvosaur has returned from the shadows of lurkery?
the New kid is taking on Void's Father. Such an honor!
the New kid is taking on Void's Father. Such an honor!
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Honestly though, even if I finished my comic, your depiction of Ziggy was more than I would have imagined. He was a walking cliche and I love how his own incompetence was his undoing. I'm proud that he was killed off by you, and again I'm honored. Thank you all for your fair voting of my first battle, and expect many more ahead (but don't expect this to be the end of ziggy, lol).
Until then, MAY THE BLOODSHED CONTINUE IN ROUND 2 OF SDT!!!